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'S' Words Contest sponsored by Constance La France

~ August 6, 2023

We cannot tame a raging storm, so with patience, we must wait for the calm. ~ by poet The balmy afternoon had been fulgent and warm Until darkness foreshadowed an approaching storm Wailing winds of the nor'easter would soon cause grief damaging fragile coral growth upon the reef Leaden clouds encroached and shrouded the gloomy day The aura changed from gold to hue of graphite gray It seemed as if an eclipse turned day into night as feathered wings rose in unison to take flight Thunder's billowed breath blew across the ocean's waves as if the tempest was demanding what it craves Atmosphere grew heavy with each powerful roar White caps rushed with clangor against the sandy shore With vengeance, the storm hurled jagged lightening strikes Split second flashes that resembled silver spikes * * * Then, the deluge rained like arrows, sharp as metal That would've wounded men like a stinging nettle The monsoon swept overland, clear across the dunes on zephyr winds that howled diabolical tunes The storm seethed with a furor that was unsuppressed leaving the seaside landscape despoiled and distressed Battered by ferocious weather that was to blame Nature's forces can be impossible to tame Finally, squalls dwindled and waves no longer surged Glowing rays of sunlight defiantly emerged And so the storm came with raging temper to vent, pillaged treasures from the sea. Yes, it came and went It was quite a balmy evening, fulgent and warm Upon the beach seashells lie, displaced by the storm

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Date: 8/8/2023 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Storm" is a wonderful write/quote/picture. Love It.... Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/7/2023 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations! This is a detailed, engaging poem about nature's fury + might. One feels the storm "...seethed with a furor." Top of the list posting for me. With best wishes, Brian
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2023 5:36:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful review of my storm filled verses, Brian. I’m grateful for your visit. .
Date: 8/7/2023 8:50:00 AM
You my friend are indeed a poet's poet. Therse verses are awesome. A very, very fine poem. A fav again. God bless.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2023 10:27:00 AM
Thank you for your time of reading me today, Robert as well as for your generous comments and faves.
Date: 8/7/2023 1:50:00 AM
This is amazing. I simply love the two. beautifully done. Just amazing... and God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2023 4:12:00 AM
G'morning, Gina and thank you for such a complimentary review.
Date: 8/6/2023 2:59:00 PM
I ditto what Jan said…..you are so gifted Lin!! A truly incredible and totally captivating poem…..Debx
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/6/2023 3:03:00 PM
And you are so complimentary. Thank you for all the support you give me in several ways, Deb. Hugs.
Date: 8/6/2023 11:59:00 AM
This truly depicts the calm before the storm, what incredible imagery Lin, i struggle to write on decent sonnet, you are so gifted my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/7/2023 1:55:00 PM
haha, I use the 12 syllable count on many of my sonnets. Gives me more freedom to elaborate in my writing. God bless.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/6/2023 3:02:00 PM
Before, during, and a titch of after. I hope two sonnets are not too long, but I wanted to take the storm full circle. Took a little poetic license with the 12-syllable count. Thank you, Jan. Hugs.
Date: 8/6/2023 10:35:00 AM
Love: It seemed as if an eclipse turned day into night as feathered wings rose in unison to take flight…zephyr winds howled? Love the imagery!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/6/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much telling me which lines you particularly enjoyed, Kim. I always appreciate that.

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