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Stars As Cat Eye Marbles

Celestial chandeliers, strung aloft the Milky Way Aligning as constellations, invisible by light of day Torches burning, that the sun prevents us to behold Earth's luminaries ignite as dusk begins to unfold Yielding glitter more lustrous than flecks of feldspar Evoking optimistic wishes from those near or far Magnificently they sparkle on a black background Alight are these orbs, as jewels they are crowned Revealing to all that life holds abundant treasure Beyond any value, their worth far beyond measure Lending us such clear vision, as through a cat's eye Exquisite marbles are the stars in the midnight sky Sparkling in the heavens, fulgid light for you and I

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Date: 12/30/2020 5:09:00 AM
I love the imagery and I love the stars at night. Beautiful poem Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mark.
Date: 12/27/2020 5:16:00 PM
Your poetry flows and sparkles , like the fulgent stars, thank you for sharing your beauty tonight, have a good evening Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/28/2020 2:28:00 AM
Thank you for reading me, Rose, and for leaving you sweet comments.
Date: 12/27/2020 9:38:00 AM
WOW Jenna this is exceptional poetry, you are so gifted as a writer, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/27/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you very much for liking this one enough to fave it, Jan.
Date: 12/27/2020 9:05:00 AM
The wonder of the heavens, Gods creation. I like nothing better than to go out on a clear winters night and just gaze in total awe Always reminds me of diamonds strewn across a black velvet cloth. Tom P S Soupmail.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/27/2020 9:44:00 AM
Tom, thank you for appreciating the vision as I also see it, and for the kind soup mail.

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