Stars

Stars By. Madisyn Jackson The stars are bright eyes Of the ones of the past But happiness fills me Looking up in the sky I see the twinkling lights Of the night sky But nothing makes me feel better Than see my life, my eyes, my past Thank you for bringing me happiness When I am so down Nothing can put my smile upside down Stars, Stars, Stars The kings of the night The twinkling of stars makes me feel Like Christmas all year Thank you for always being there

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Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 10:26:00 AM

Madisyn :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2015 2:41:00 PM

aww the imagery is so charming - what a lovely romantic write:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2015 11:14:00 AM

aww Madisyn thanks for the lovely comment I simply write to express myself and my emotions a nd if possible to make people laugh - it has only been 14 months since i statred posting - I wrote my first poem after my hubby underwent cancer surgery- am having the time of my life and it has got me through the worst time in my life:-) Hugs Jan xx

Madisyn Jackson
Date: 4/28/2015 10:43:00 AM

Thank you, I have read some of your work, and you are inspiring.

Ryan Wanless

Date: 4/27/2015 1:22:00 PM

Oh boy, STARS. Stars. STARS STARS STARS. Stars.