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St. Vitus Dance

The staccato stammering of bass guitars punctuated the flash of strobe lights. Limitless vistas of black and gray; smothering the crowd in ghoulish poses. Framed, as if frozen, in a glow of acid white. Some stagger, their movements mimicking, the rigors of death or birth? Others jerk puppet like upon invisible, randomly clipped, strings. And, as the music grinds to a halt, driven by the apocalyptic pace of the Disc Jockey, and the hard scratching sound of synthesizers; the charmed, trance dancers disperse; swallowed whole by the shadows. *St. Vitus's dance was a social phenomenon that occurred primarily in mainland Europe between the 14th and 18th centuries; it involved groups of people, sometimes thousands at a time, who danced uncontrollably and bizarrely. Men, women, and children would dance through the streets of towns or cities, sometimes foaming at the mouth until they collapsed from fatigue....and the beat goes on....

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Date: 9/15/2010 9:00:00 PM
Congrats TEACH on your HM in Paula's Dance contest... she still cannot finalize her contest but posted a blog listing all the poem titles and I am looking them up individually to congratulate luv.. enjoy your special honor..pupil in LUV...
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:08:00 PM
My Mom had Parkinson's and she didn't foam at the mouth Zera, and I'm sure they didn't gather 1000's of OCD people together to "jerk" till they dropped, it was WAY more than that..way more, mass hysteria I'm sure too. MY POINT was the dancing Goths under stobe lights looked like those folks must have looked.
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:53:00 AM
"St Vitus" was the label used for people that had parkinsons disease, also sometimes OCD and anxiety disorders manifest in this jerking repetitive motion disorder. Without science, as in many things midevil, it was explained by sorcery and superstition.
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Date: 9/8/2010 1:25:00 PM
Yup my sweetheart I know it's a malady...and it may or may not have caused or aided in the spread of the Black Death...which was the image I was alluding to.."these Goth's" they remind me of the worship of death...
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Date: 9/8/2010 11:50:00 AM
St. Vitus dance is a malady as well luv and u do shiver and shake and quake uncontrollably .. good entry if this is the one u entered... u should this one is a great write TEACH.. enjoyed the explanation and information luv.. pupil..
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Date: 9/7/2010 10:03:00 PM
wow, very interesting stuff here. I think you did awesome free verse and this better do well in that dance contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:20:00 PM
Hi Deborah, this is the first time i've been able to read your poems for an age, my p.c froze everytime i tried. interesting this poem, as a child growing up in england, if we acted stupid or something like that, we were told we had St Vitus dance. So what you have written is not only a wonderful poem, but informative too. i would like to enter your contest, but again my p.c is the problem it will not play the video, please inform me if it not correct. i do love this poem. Harry
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Date: 9/6/2010 6:22:00 PM
oh...and once satisfied, i write good poetry! jimbo
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Date: 9/6/2010 6:20:00 PM
this happens to me about every 13...14 wks...I call it "feeding the lion in me" and I do....jimbo
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:12:00 PM
Yikes I better fix this..grrrrrrrrr
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Date: 9/6/2010 3:47:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my blog, your poem is wonderful once I found it, was I suppiose to have go to the ends of the earth to find it, ha ha... love constance
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:39:00 PM
WOW!! Deborah, enjoyed your poem*luv~SKAT
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