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Springtime

Thick, grey clouds subside - The sun is free, the sky can breathe at last. *Form: Gogyoka

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Painted Hunter

Date: 4/4/2013 7:17:00 AM

Here's another I hadn't seen before. I agree with what you said about Dead buffaloes roaming(I was turkey hunting on the plateau in Nebraska when I wrote it)...our worlds are very different, and I love reading about yours. The sky you describe, in so few words, is almost alien to me. Love it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 5:51:00 PM

Heather, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 1:57:00 AM

Congratulations on yet another well deserved win heather xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Heather. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:20:00 PM

Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 4:10:00 PM

oops, I was thinking you were someone else when I wrote my comment below. But I now know you too!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 4:09:00 PM

hey, in a way, yours was like mine!! way to go, girlfriend. BIG congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 4:09:00 PM

and how did I ever miss this one??

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 10/29/2012 12:00:00 PM

Wouldn't it be nice if it did that here too; Kindest regards for your pretty review. Nice poem.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/28/2012 5:18:00 AM

Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry

Kash Poet

Date: 10/27/2012 11:17:00 PM

Just wonderful!!!This will do good in the contest.Thanks for visiting and commenting at my poem.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/27/2012 2:30:00 PM

Beautiful piece my dear poet friend... very enjoyed... Michael

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/26/2012 6:20:00 PM

Thank you for your cheery optimistic poem about spring... good luck in Joann's contest! Hugs, Jack

David Scott

Date: 10/26/2012 3:37:00 PM

LOVLEY WRITE MATE IVE WROTE ABOUT THESE SEAWSONS MYSELF WELCOMNE TO SOUP XX DAVIDSCOTT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2012 6:54:00 AM

What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Heather. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 10/25/2012 5:34:00 PM

Lovely poem Heather, enjoyed, love elizabeth