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Spring's In the Air

Winter's winking wearily in the sun gracefully giving ground knowing Spring will never run Muted, molted, monochromatic colors turn vibrant, vivacious, victoriously welcoming the return Soft, subtle scents in the air lilacs lovingly linger in the tresses of my hair Pink petals purling to the ground blossoms blindly blowing whirling all around Daisies dancing daintily in the breeze flowers frolicking freely after thawing from the freeze Daylight dilly dallies, delaying days end encircling, enticing, enchanting like the embrace of a friend. *end* TDR 4-14-15

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Date: 6/15/2016 1:43:00 PM
TDR: This wonderful piece awakened all my senses and made me laugh. Thank you for these moments of joy. Thank you for sharing them with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 1:51:00 PM
I'm so glad I could bring a bit of laughter to your world today. I'm honored that you like my poem! Thank you for taking the time to tell me so. ~Trudy~
Date: 6/12/2016 11:08:00 AM
This dance you have with the opening words of each line is like a quick step..a very nice skill to have..I enjoyed this for it's a skill I don't have and gave your poem life
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 1:48:00 PM
Aww Frederic, thank you for that beautiful comment! This was a fun one for me, it just seemed to flow right out of me! So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 6/11/2016 8:41:00 AM
What wonderful alliteration Trudy I love the transition of all the seasons but especially Winter to Spring when the world burst with colour:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 6/11/2016 7:45:00 AM
Great alliterations, it flowed so well, enjoyed :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:58:00 PM
Trudy, a nice enjoyment of spring. Dancing daisies... I love alliteration. SKAT
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