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Spring Summer Haikus

Intricate spring life, Nature's bounty overflow: Bees love luscious blooms. Little lotus bloom On the surface of the pond, Dragonfly resting. Basking in summer No hot sun cream protection Red skin many days. Regal red crowns of Fragrant spicy dianthus: Hot summer is near. Vivid butterfly Pollen in the heavy air – Deadly spider's web. Late-night kiss of love, Guitars flutter in the night: Midsummer madness.

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Date: 7/20/2024 12:04:00 PM
what a gorgeous string of summer haiku - of course my favourite is the dragonfly one! hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2024 3:14:00 PM
What a beauteous set of summer haikus Victor. So very lovely. Enjoy your poetry evening. Blessings :)
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Date: 7/17/2024 12:44:00 AM
Lovely haikus dear Victor. I'm m trying not to make the last one my fav. "Little lotus bloom On the surface of the pond, Dragonfly resting." Great one.
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Date: 7/14/2024 7:44:00 PM
Great imagery and feelings in your Haikus. Blessings my friend
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Date: 7/14/2024 1:56:00 PM
It's nice to be in midsummer, just like you described in your thread of Haikus all pleasing to the eye. Enjoyed! xo
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Date: 7/11/2024 9:16:00 AM
Fun to read these. I think my favorite is the last one, Victor.
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Date: 7/10/2024 12:46:00 PM
Victor, I love haikus. These ones are really enchanting. BRAVO!
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Date: 7/9/2024 10:57:00 PM
All are sweet, but the last two I liked the most. I'm not adept at haiku. Great write.
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Date: 7/9/2024 11:57:00 AM
Beautiful Haikus Victor!! Great use of imagery and onomatopoeia!! You have accurately captured the essence of the season my friend!! A splendid set of seasonal sensations Victor!! Well Done
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Date: 7/9/2024 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful, enchanting mood write. Who does not like summer?! Some places, like Arizona, sunscreen a must. Juiced and ripened by the sun. Still a joy.
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Date: 7/9/2024 12:57:00 AM
great celebration of summer, quite inspiring and delicate, enjoyed yann
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Date: 7/8/2024 11:35:00 PM
Varying scenes of spring and summer, beautifully depicted through a well composed haiku series. Of all, I like the last one the most. Have a great week ahead, dear Victor.
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Date: 7/8/2024 9:20:00 PM
These haiku are very nice, Victor. The beauty and glory of both seasons are brought to life by your amazing imagery. I love the last one best. Great work! :)
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Date: 7/8/2024 3:14:00 PM
Love the second and last the best! Very nice, dear one!
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Date: 7/8/2024 2:04:00 PM
Ahh!! I enjoyed the feel of these. Thank you for sharing them with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/8/2024 1:59:00 PM
Six wonderful haiku all with their own unique imagery..I particularly liked the last one... Great assortment of words as always..
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Date: 7/8/2024 10:07:00 AM
Hello Victor, I always loved great Haikus and I very much believe that yours falls right into that category. I enjoyed reading every segment. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/8/2024 9:53:00 AM
A lovely set of haikus, love the last two especially
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Date: 7/8/2024 9:35:00 AM
The world buzzes in summer. These are innovative haiku. They're fun to read.
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Date: 7/8/2024 8:41:00 AM
A great set of haiku, Very nicely done
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Date: 7/8/2024 6:56:00 AM
The act of nature being thorough: ... the gifts of sharing that neccesitates perpetuity...temporal housing for breathing or breeding...workplace water cooler fun-in-the-sun gossips...natures way of gossiping via show-n-swell...the truths of nature via good deeds and needs...ahh, the best way of tuning a guitar that's off-key due to poor lighting...Aloha
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Date: 7/8/2024 6:33:00 AM
Very nice Haiku’s Victor, lovely words on the the spring and summer… Beryl
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Date: 7/8/2024 5:47:00 AM
Nice haikus Vic. I can deffo identify with the third one. Ouch
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Date: 7/8/2024 5:18:00 AM
Beautiful and such picturesque string of haiku! I love the last one and also how youv woven “ Little lotus bloom On the surface of the pond, Dragonfly resting.“ i can see through those words! Soul warming! And stunning! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 7/8/2024 4:54:00 AM
Lovely poem, lovely imagery, lovely Victor!! Cuddles….Debx
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