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Spring Habit

plain and naked oaks white-out-green on ev’ry branch — neighbors disappear 2/23/2021 Spring Traditional Haiku Sponsor: Malabika Choudhury

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Date: 3/6/2021 12:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2021 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 3/4/2021 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love the spring tree coming alive and your write. Have a blessed day...........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/4/2021 2:02:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/3/2021 10:43:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/4/2021 4:40:00 AM
God bless you too, Beata! Thank you!
Date: 3/3/2021 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ~ Mala
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Mala!
Date: 3/3/2021 7:31:00 PM
What an interesting 3rd line. Love how it invites speculation. Best wishes. Be well, Brian
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Brian!
Date: 3/3/2021 8:24:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with your wonderfully penned Haiku poem, well done _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2021 8:13:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 2/26/2021 7:37:00 AM
Nice one ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 2/26/2021 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations in advance... This one would definitely be placed. Love the imagery! And good luck... Regards, Paghunda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Paghunda!
Date: 2/25/2021 8:43:00 PM
I hope the oak does not make a habit of its new habit. ~ Little Sisters of the Poor
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2021 3:56:00 AM
:)
Date: 2/25/2021 7:25:00 PM
Looks like a contending haiku for the contest. Good luck with it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2021 7:35:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/25/2021 10:45:00 AM
That's the best part! Aloha! Rico
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2021 2:53:00 PM
Aloha! Thanks, Rico!
Date: 2/25/2021 2:29:00 AM
- I had a neighbor who kept a lot of weird things in the garden ...it was a pleasure when the leaves on the trees covered "the trash" :) - Best wishes in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2021 4:52:00 AM
LOL! Thankfully I have pleasant neighbors.
Date: 2/24/2021 11:31:00 PM
very nice! love the white-out-green line :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2021 4:52:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 2/24/2021 11:01:00 PM
The oak can hide all the surroundings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2021 4:52:00 AM
For sure! Looking forward to the Spring.

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