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Spirit Walk

I never know what I will find when I wander through my mind Like a deer trail that’ll bend and wind a mountain forest in my mind Twinkling stars through pine trees shine a twilight meadow in my mind Truth and lies seem to fall behind in the tangled bushes in my mind With clearing thoughts I seem to find forgotten dreams inside my mind As shadows clear I’m not so blind to built up hardships in my mind I walk, I heal and soon I find a Tru spirit walk in my own mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/7/2012 11:15:00 PM
trudy, congratulations in Brian Strand's 186th contest. Take care, it's been fun reading many winners tonight* PD
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Date: 7/5/2012 5:37:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Much can happen in our minds..Sara
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Trudy. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2012 6:33:00 PM
One of the awesome pieces i have seen recently..congrats, Jag
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 7/3/2012 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Jag, a lovely compliment
Date: 7/1/2012 4:07:00 PM
What a gorgeous stroll thru your mind...congrats on a wonderfully penned piece. gwendolen
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 7/3/2012 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Gwendolen!
Date: 7/1/2012 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 7/3/2012 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Joann!
Date: 7/1/2012 10:13:00 AM
congrats Trudy on a great first place win .. awesome ..luv...
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 7/3/2012 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Linda-Marie! I didn 't know that one was judged till you commented...thank you ! ~Trudy~
Date: 10/5/2009 6:09:00 AM
When we stop long enough to have that walk we can find all sorts of items some good, some bad, and some that need discarding. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:10:00 AM
Nice mysticism. Keep it up! Sincerely Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/8/2009 7:53:00 PM
Good write! - eddie
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Date: 6/27/2009 2:39:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this gentle yet beautifully vivid poem. Great floe and rhyme. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/24/2009 8:43:00 AM
Hi Trudy A beautiful spirit walk indeed. Also a lovely couplet. Truly enjoyed hun. Hey I too wrote a poem called spirit walk. I think you would enjoy it. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 6/23/2009 11:30:00 PM
Excellent coupleyts Trudy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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