Spirit

You pass me as I fly by. Closer to the mist in the sky. I'm getting closer to that place. Where I'll meet you in the sky. Can you tell me where does the spirit go when you die? I want to know so I can meet you there when I die. 7/ 23/ 2015 2:20pm

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2015 7:00:00 PM

oh gosh, how did I not see this? I really like how it reads. It reminds me of the Spirit in the Sky song I loved so much in my teens. WEll, You are my last read of the night, Debbie. Just so much to do!!! Goodnight now.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/12/2015 8:09:00 PM

I like this dreamy, dazey verse...the last line is deep, chilling... absolutely wonderful! Always, Laura

Constance La France

Date: 8/12/2015 4:26:00 PM

Debbie, this is beautiful and somehow fitting considering the poem you visited today , God's love for a little girl, I was honestly shocked when that poem got an NA in the first contest placed in but happy it placed in another contest, thanks for visiting

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/24/2015 7:22:00 PM

G'day Debbie... an interesting poem with a question that I'm certain will bring forth multiple answers. I enjoyed your poem Debbie - Lindsay

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/24/2015 5:59:00 AM

Perhaps we do have spirits. Wouldn't that be nice? That you want to meet after death is a cute idea. You are out there now, and I appreciate being able to approach you this way. Your words will be here for a long time. The pleasant thought I have for you is here right now. Thank-you so much! You have started my day with a smile. That is a gift.