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She returns my gaze when I'm too restless to sleep a lustrous pearl mounted, deep set in a sapphire sky I lie awake in my room, papered in spider spun silk Slumber is allusive to us tonight; the moon and I I wonder what thoughts she holds in her heart Surely not man's doctrine of trivial pragmatism Not by the one who rules the tide's ebb and flow Her mellow glow is a healing ointment of chrism

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/6/2018 12:58:00 PM

Hello Lin Lang, i do not like spiders they creep me out. have a nice day my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/7/2018 4:25:00 AM

I'm sure they think the same thing about humans. It's Lane. do lang do lang do lang

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2018 4:08:00 AM

I cannot resist poems about the moon when they are this masterful Lin! Luna soothes and sympathizes in the lonely night shedding her luminous light, feelings I share. This poem is awe inspiring Lin and it is going into my faves! xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 6/1/2018 11:51:00 AM

Your comment was balm to me today, Connie. Thank you for the many compliments you've given my poetry...moon related or not. Mahalo, dear friend.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/28/2018 10:42:00 AM

Oh, I love this. So mystical to me. I wish I had a window seat like your picture - I would use those restless nights to look at the moon. A favorite.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2018 11:45:00 AM

I agree, and a telescope to feel closer to the stars. Thanks, Sun.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/15/2018 10:42:00 PM

Your poems are of moonlight glow Laney...very enchanting my friend...love and light...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 5/17/2018 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for a light in the dark comment, WW.

John Gondolf

Date: 5/13/2018 7:44:00 PM

These’s something magical about gazing at the moon and it can have a very calming affect on our spirit. Another very lovely poem, Lin, enjoyed reading it.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/14/2018 5:43:00 AM

Yes there is, John. Thank you, as always, for your gracious thoughts on my moonlit reverie.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/13/2018 1:39:00 PM

Lovely description of the moon, a lustrous pearl. How often I gaze at it, its a facinating heavenely body. A we'll written verse Lin. Tom.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/13/2018 1:43:00 PM

Thank you very kindly for your thoughts, Tom

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/12/2018 11:46:00 PM

Some poems I am at a loss for words for comments, magical, sometimes you just love a poem, and dont need a reason why!! :)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/13/2018 5:30:00 AM

I think you found all the right words, Arthur. Thank you for liking this one so well. I know it must be relatable to you.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/12/2018 6:20:00 PM

Wow, a FAVE in my books. Purely divine inspiration, Lin. Awesome.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/13/2018 5:30:00 AM

Thank you ever so much for your thoughts, Line. They're appreciated.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/12/2018 5:45:00 PM

Not sure exactly what it is but the moon seems to have mystical powers. I've caught myself lost in it's gaze many a night. I love your poem, Lin. I hope you have a Happy Mother's Day, Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/13/2018 5:29:00 AM

She is hypnotic and linked to so many wonderful thoughts. Thanks a lot, Danny, for the kind remarks and the well wishes.

Chris Green

Date: 5/12/2018 5:23:00 PM

This was enchantingly beautiful Lin. I really enjoyed this poem. So beautiful

Lin Lane
Date: 5/13/2018 5:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Chris. It's great to hear from you.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2018 3:34:00 PM

Lin your imagery is amazing from start to finish and I adore the wall papered in spider spun silk and both the moon and the writer being awake - adding this gem to my vaes:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 5/13/2018 5:27:00 AM

Oh what generous comments you've given this one, Jan. Thank you very much.