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Written: October 23, 2023 __________________________________________ In an expanse full of vibrant marvels, I roam. A restless poet soul, aiming for a spot to call home. Amid storms and destiny's unremitting draw. I sustain to propel upward, my spirit strong flaw. Stand shoulder close by with the towering trees. I still sway, in sequence states of sublime sleaze. Having both a zesty sanity and a nexus soul. I am a lover of tales and contemporary tole. At a wooden desk, wrapped with trepidation. I reveal the enigmas unveiled in my orientation. Salvaged from time, akin to riches of the past. I dabble with words, trying to craft a story to last. In frostbitten palms, emotions nestling deep, I decry solace in the icy promises they keep. Quenched by the whispers of wind and icy breath, I let my thoughts wander, defying death. Inside my mind, a world unfolds, Where stories are told and destinies are bold. With each word written, a new chapter unfurls As the wanderer's tale takes flight and twirls. Through wooden limbs and ancient lore, I paint a canvas of emotions galore. From the storms of passion to the calm of peace, Every word I write, every line I release, Carries the essence of my wandering soul, A tapestry of longing, of life's intricate toll. For in the words I weave, my spirit finds release, And the wanderer's tale finds its eternal peace.

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Date: 10/24/2023 9:43:00 AM
Very evocative and poignant write this is, dear Sotto! You've very beautifully said that every line that we knit incorporate the deepest emotions of our wandering souls, who traverse myriad philosophical dimensions in search of peace and tranquility..Our poems reflect our heart..This poem is a pure marvel and it resonated with my soul..our quills are brush-pen which strokes vivid textures and hues of feelings..You've astoundingly elaborated here with your impeccable rhymes and imagery, love this
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:56:00 AM
Sotto, you expose my theory that any poem should be built on emotion, both good and bad. Brilliant musings as A tapestry of longing, of life's intricate toll. That is poetry of the highest degree. Blessings.
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:00:00 AM
Through wooden limbs and ancient lore, I paint a canvas of emotions galore. From the storms of passion to the calm of peace, Every word I write, every line I release---how beautiful is that my friend. Your soul speaks eloquently in this poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:00:00 AM
What an intimate expression on what it means as a writer to write and create. Your word choice is melodic and flows well with the message. This is a gem. Well done.
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Date: 10/24/2023 12:08:00 AM
What a deeply moving and meaningful poem this is! I am in awe captivated by your rhymes and flow of words that truly are so very creative and evocative. You’ve expressed so much in such eloquence as always. And i love the alliterations and descriptive diction too! Especially love the line “ With each word written, a new chapter unfurls As the wanderer's tale takes flight and twirls.“ this resonates and hits so strong! So intricately crafted and woven every word! Absolute pleasure reading this
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Date: 10/23/2023 8:40:00 PM
I liked this. You have a llot to say, especially in poetry!
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Date: 10/23/2023 7:11:00 PM
That is emotional with a great picture.
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