So Fine

Grinds so fine. Keep steep steady. Catch ev’ry nitty gritty. Screen darkness dregs. Press, add water. Start ebonic eddy. Stir ‘nilla cream, bright and witty. Chat with friends so fine. Keep.

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/25/2024 6:35:00 PM

Ah, wow- I drink so much coffee, lol- loved this

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2024 6:43:00 PM

Love that you loved this! Thanks, Paige, for reading my poetry! I so appreciate you, my friend!

David Crandall

Date: 6/25/2024 3:53:00 PM

Great poem Kim! I love coffee, but because of my stomach, I only drink it when I need to be smart for a job interview.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2024 4:58:00 PM

Thank you! Sorry about your stomach. It happens.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2024 1:27:00 PM

I don't like coffee but I bet coffee lovers will drink this up! heehee. Anything that is an excuse to chat with friends rocks!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2024 5:00:00 PM

LOL…yes, some things bring us together for a chat. My 18 year old granddaughter is visiting so I made her coffee and whipped up the cream…better than Starbucks!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/25/2024 9:32:00 AM

A good poem. It is good to have coffee with friends. I liked this poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2024 5:00:00 PM

Yes, it is! Thank you, Hilda!