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Snowman Suntan

Meet Frosty Snowman. WHAT!!! BIG LUMP OF SNOW ON LAWN??? OOPS!!! Too much sunshine!

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John Loving Iii

Date: 10/24/2009 9:39:00 AM

very nice visual. but what about the part where they say "No animals were harmed in the making poem. " you forgot that part.

Date: 10/23/2009 11:23:00 AM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Thank you for the day brightener. I like the title. Thanks also for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/23/2009 7:41:00 AM

LOL! What a witty way you have of expressing poor Frosty's dilemna. Too much sunshine, indeed, can result in disaster for snowmen. Love it! Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2009 6:18:00 AM

Shock of the day. Frosty is gone in a flash. Loved it. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2009 4:13:00 AM

I enjoyed reading you poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing it Martin. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Your lawn needed watered anyways my friend. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/23/2009 3:34:00 AM

Poor snowman has too short a life! Thanks Marty for your comments. I am still very busy with packing, goes to slowly!! Will have time for new poems when I have moved...Gert

Anthony Nutter

Date: 10/23/2009 2:48:00 AM

I'm smiling, I guess Frosty is suffering from the ultimate case of heat exhaustion. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/23/2009 12:57:00 AM

A good laugh with my coffee this morning, good write Martin too much sun will get you every time..Danny