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8/18/2024 for Nursery Rhymes Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper 

Diddle, diddle, dumpling, Rex, the dog, Sleeping soundly in unconscious fog - You can read about it on my cat blog - Diddle, diddle, dumpling, that dumb dog. Hey, doodle-deedle, so it began - The postman and me - the cat! - hatched a plan - Ambien added to a dog food can - Ol' Rex is headed for Snoozeville, man.

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Date: 9/4/2024 3:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 9/4/2024 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 8/29/2024 6:47:00 AM
Love the plan for the dog from the cat. This poem is fantastic!
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David Crandall
Date: 8/29/2024 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Miranda. I think I watched too many cartoons as a kid - lol!
Date: 8/28/2024 9:28:00 AM
Love the nursery rhyme David, congratulations on your top spot win in Eve’s contest… Beryl
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David Crandall
Date: 8/28/2024 7:05:00 PM
Thanks Beryl - glad you liked it!
Date: 8/28/2024 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations!
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David Crandall
Date: 8/28/2024 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Terry!
Date: 8/28/2024 1:49:00 AM
Oh dear poet, first in first place! congratulations squared on your win. Happy writing. cheers!!!
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/28/2024 9:48:00 PM
yes, happy reference.
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David Crandall
Date: 8/28/2024 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Thriveni - I think I catch a math reference there!
Date: 8/19/2024 5:59:00 AM
Hello David, I laughed this morning reading your poem! I hope you do well in the contest. - Blessings, Daniel
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David Crandall
Date: 8/19/2024 11:12:00 AM
haha, I'm glad I gave you a laugh, thanks Daniel!

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