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Smile Mona Smile

That Mona Lisa thought she could smile Well let me show her how it's done She only had that Da Vinci dude But me, I've got myself the sun Just look at my long beautiful lashes For these, Mona Lisa would have killed Compared to me, that picture of her Just looks like some paint got spilled So keep right on smiling Mona Lisa And I might even give you a nod That Da Vinci dude might have been famous But I was painted by the Hand of God For Carolyn's Contest

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Date: 7/12/2010 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:03:00 AM
Amazing take on the picture in Carolyn's contest. Congratulations Larry >> James
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:14:00 AM
Wonderful write and congats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:33:00 PM
I just knew this was a winner, congrats, Larry! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:17:00 PM
Congrats again for the 2nd place win, Larry.
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:04:00 PM
Cool poem, Larry! congratultions! LUv,Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, congrats on your 2nd place win. Caryl
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:30:00 PM
I love it. It's very unique and creative. Congradulations on 2nd place. This is another one of your poems I have enjoyed very much. Love Destiny
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations,Larry on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 2:59:00 PM
Great entry. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:03:00 PM
Exquisite, Larry. Wow....you truly are an amazing and versatile poet. Your works are getting better and more diversified. Shows your true talent. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on placing second in the contest with this unique and creative interpretation of the photo, Larry! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2010 3:58:00 AM
Love it !! I think you'll make us all smile with this one. Great last line. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/9/2010 7:33:00 PM
oh-- this is divine, Larry!! You got me smiling ^_^ with this one, and that last line of yours was just perfect! Yup, no one could top that! Enjoyed this one with an extra smile to boot--Carolyn's pic really was so cute! -nikko :)
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Date: 7/9/2010 6:43:00 PM
Awesome write, Larry. LOL. Good luck. Thanks for you comments, my friend. Ralph
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