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Sky Afire

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Bright, out-shimmering the stars, Venus, Jupiter and Mars ... Each November, guard the moon, Whilst the Seven Sisters swoon. Stars that swim a sea instead, Mars is blushing, cheeks so red ... Moon and Venus kiss, adored, Swoon for Jupiter, their lord. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Jujue-Oijue With A Twist" Poetry Contest, Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/21/2019 3:26:00 PM
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oh I love this, Greg. A belated congrats to you here on this cute little poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2019 1:40:00 AM
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That's very sweet, Andrea, and I'm so pleased you liked it - thank you! :-) <3
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/17/2019 8:45:00 AM
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CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Greg! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2019 1:40:00 AM
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Many kind thank you's to you, Janice - so appreciated! :-) <3
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Charles Messina
Date: 4/17/2019 6:08:00 AM
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Brilliant Greg, absolutely masterful. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings...Charlie
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2019 1:39:00 AM
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That's very kind of you, Charlie, and I thank you so much for the thoughtful comment! Blessings, My Poet Brother! :-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2019 11:29:00 PM
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The form mastered; the poem, divine. ~ Gershon
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2019 1:37:00 AM
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You are very kind, Gershon - blessings, Buddy! :-)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/24/2019 10:34:00 AM
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This makes me want to turn into a stargazer, and never join the real world again, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2019 1:37:00 AM
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That's very kind of you, Caren, thank you so much! :-) <3

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