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Written, February 17, 2025,
For The Premiere Contest, “Skating Upon Saturn's Rings”
Sponsor, Sara Jama

Saturn's rings mystify me indeed- all seem bound with no purpose or need. Spinning boulders and ice- pictures of them add spice. In the end, where will good answers lead? But, last night I woke up from strange dreams; found I landed by way of moonbeams! To my greatest surprise right in front of my eyes- Large space monsters fast led to my screams! The group traveled on magical skates fixed beneath monster dumpsters with grates- which then opened to spread the trapped boulders instead of them roaming around with bad fates. They sprawled tons of old space-filled debris, and I gathered from what I could see, kept those rings plumped up well; captured for a long spell eased collisions in our Galaxy! Now, I know that these facts aren't true cause that's not how those circles accrue! Magnetism makes rings space debris to them clings! So, this theme earned my fun poet's view!

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