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I would like to wish all the mothers the happiest of Mother's Days.

I was a competent, happy housewife, but that was before my husband died, Leaving me to rear myriad children solo, as the lone star twinkles with pride. John had left us a prosperous farm, with a lovely home, shaped like a shoe; And our older children did farm work daily, as they'd ever been wont to do. My older children were reliable and steadfast, since they were nearly grown; But, my young ones often got in mischief, and my eldest didn't live at home. Although I loved my children dearly, they did ofttimes, seem to be in my hair. Then, 'Shoo, shoo,' I would gently urge them, to go out and play somewhere. Faithful friends were from neighboring farms, faces so familiar all of our lives; As a fun, fascinating rainbow does not go out of fashion, adored as it arrives. Other family at times frequented roads and fields, to follow their fond hearts, 'Ere mauve sun favored us with fading smiles. Fine family can't be long apart. I lived in the house of sweet chaos, like the tangled, wildflower seas of hues, Where vexing pranks were common, and imps hid in tall grasses, chartreuse. Red robin's afternoon song was rapt, on our road of the ruffled, rouge roses, Where yesterday seemed recently recreated, in same old, nearby primroses. While nice neighbors were nothing new, noon callers wore the term, naturally; And bore treats for the children; as peach, midday sun beamed, rapturously. Mulberry heat peeked over the horizon each dawn, to discover what katydid; As green mimic plants stole other's identities, keeping their ruse top secret! Lotus flower seed pods resembled aliens, having at least a dozen, alert eyes; Then Chinese lanterns lit up evening gardens, for sangria, summer surprise! Although I was a patient, aging mother, one day my patience was sorely tried, By a house full of naughty children, like the storm where rosy, sunshine died! Frazzled and furious, I sent them all to bed, although the sun had barely set; After giving them broth without any bread. But, the usual kiss, I didn't forget. My children came in from the fields, immediately noticing an uncommon quiet. Noting my state of utter exhaustion, and promising they'd help me rest to get. Hearth and home is happier now, as two of my children help me out each day, Leaving plenty to manage the farm ably. Now, I love to watch the others play! My pearly smiles come much more frequent, since dark eye circles have gone; And my golden years are full of sunshine, like soon coming of a purple dawn!

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Date: 5/30/2024 6:29:00 AM
What a beautiful write as seen through the eyes of a widow, bereft and left with so many children. We see the kindness of neighbors, the angst and love of a mother and the tenderness in her children as she ages. LOvely and a fave! ~ Kim
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/30/2024 8:26:00 PM
Dear Kim, I am thrilled by your kind words and by your fave. Thank you for brightening my day.
Date: 5/15/2024 10:27:00 AM
Evelyn, master of the poetic paintbrush, I love your storytelling poems and this story of grief, family and life after the death of a husband, life after the children are grown is all wrapped up in a nursery rhyme. So clever and so creative and full of your delightful couplets. A beautiful tribute to mothers, especially those raising a family alone! Thank you for this poem from your heart. Blessings!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/15/2024 9:59:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your lovely observations and compliments, my friend. Your gracious response makes my efforts so rewarding. Blessings and hugs. :)
Date: 5/14/2024 12:45:00 AM
Simply a very touching poem.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/14/2024 8:45:00 PM
I appreciate your kind thoughts very much, Arthur.
Date: 5/12/2024 11:13:00 PM
I will always try to read your Saturday poem as I admire the ease you compose your couplets. Great description of a widow who takes care of everyone. Simply beautiful.
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Date: 5/13/2024 10:04:00 PM
Your appreciation brings constant delight, my friend. Thank you for your kind remarks, and your loyalty. :)
Date: 5/12/2024 12:57:00 AM
beautiful memories, and so touching poem, thanks to children to make life easier enjoyed yann
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:59:00 AM
Heartfelt thanks for your delightful comments, Yann.:)
Date: 5/11/2024 3:44:00 PM
Your poem beautifully captures the resilience and love of a mother facing the trials and triumphs of single-handedly raising a family after the loss of her husband. The imagery of the farm, shaped like a shoe, and the bustling chaos of daily life paints a vivid picture of the challenges she faces, from managing mischievous children to tending to the responsibilities of the land.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/11/2024 10:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Silent One. I am so pleased by your precious comment. Blessings.
Date: 5/11/2024 9:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/beautiful "Shoo" write. Motherhood is a full time job. "Happy Mother's Day To All The Moms." Take The Day Off... Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/11/2024 10:19:00 PM
Thank you very much for your appreciative comments, Paula. Mothers do deserve a restful day off, and I hope your special day is restful and happy, too.
Date: 5/11/2024 5:27:00 AM
Rejoicing life amid family. Wonderful images of life throughout, Evelyn. I like the happy ending as well.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/11/2024 10:12:00 PM
Thank you for the happiness of your comment, Vijay. Your gracious words mean so much. Blessings.
Date: 5/11/2024 2:33:00 AM
So touching and also beautiful how descriptively youv written this dear evelyn, you have a way with using words in a very captivating manner. So artistically moving how youv delivered this story in the form of couplet! Brilliant! Pleasure reading this and worthy it is of all the accolades! Definitely a fave for me
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/11/2024 10:07:00 PM
My dear Ink, your words, as usual, have brought sunshine into my day. My deepest thanks to you for sharing their warmth with me. Your fave brings me joy as well. Blessings.
Date: 5/10/2024 9:39:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem with threads of an old nursery rhyme. I love how you wove it together bringing it to life. Happy Mother's Day to you.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/10/2024 10:16:00 PM
Thank for your very gladdening remarks, Hilda. :)

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