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Shine

Sometimes you have to break So that the light seeps in Slowly through open cracks Sealing scars and your fears Shining bright inside out Sewing cloaks of wisdom Spools of thread now untwined. 22.4.2021 Contest: Pleiades 5.

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Date: 4/27/2021 7:37:00 PM
A big big congratulations on your win. This is well deserved, I enjoyed every bit of this poem.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/28/2021 12:03:00 AM
Thank you dear Funom....much appreciated :)
Date: 4/25/2021 2:49:00 PM
Carol, congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/24/2021 7:47:00 PM
This is truly haunting, Carol. Penetrates deep. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Cheers, Gershon
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/25/2021 12:43:00 AM
Yes Gershon it is....much appreciated :)
Date: 4/21/2021 11:11:00 PM
A very pleasant Pleiades.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/21/2021 11:45:00 PM
Thank you dear Victor....much appreciated :)

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