Get Your Premium Membership

Sequidilla-1

Copley Square – circa 1955 Copley Square, cobblestone streets, chattering liars rattling farewell to midnight’s dampened, dwindling fires. Gas lights flickering trembling at passion’s passing – two hearts bickering. 9/13/2017 submitted to – SEGUIDILLA – Poetry Contest howmanysyllables has a few quirks it counts the apostrophe in “passion’s” as a syllable and also counts the dash (-) as a syllable.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/23/2017 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win it is nicely done, John. Hugs Eve ~`*
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2017 7:04:00 AM
Great short story based on the picture, John:) my heartfelt congratulations on your great win :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2017 7:29:00 PM
a very interesting take on the picture, John. That was my birth year, so loved that this took place in the 50's. Congrats on a great win.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2017 3:05:00 PM
John, congratulations on your placement with this really wonderful write ~
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2017 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations John! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2017 1:52:00 PM
a unique approach to the theme so powerfully crafted...my best congrats, john!.. i appreciate your participation in this challenge..huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2017 7:31:00 AM
Hi John. Yes, we both focused on the cobblestone streets. Very well done. Good luck in the contest :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2017 7:16:00 AM
Excellent John, good luck :)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things