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September Falls

Silver-lined clumps of cloud fleet floats away End-summer splendor shines in ashen sky Pairs of joyful birds bathe in the blue bay The fall’s footsteps trace hued track on the sly Ember meadow wears crown of diamond dew Mesmeric dawn gleams finesse of dream glow Blazing garden path gets paved with gold new Empty tree boughs shed bronze leaves rustling slow Relined spent sun in satin sky sets fire Falling night sprouts sapphire stars shining bright Amazed, I roam with mind soaring higher Long to absorb the moondust with delight Lilting crisp air spreads out ripples of cheer Songful my heart hasn’t found yours so much near

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Date: 10/26/2024 9:35:00 AM
Dear Subimal, you vibrant imagery captures Fall in all its beauty and glory! Congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/26/2024 10:09:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your read and encouraging comments.
Date: 9/30/2024 10:03:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/30/2024 11:04:00 PM
Thank you, Beata for your read and encouraging comments. I believe in God at the core of my soul and want to be blessed.
Date: 9/30/2024 1:45:00 PM
i like the many references you made to autumn with your September acrostic here, Subimal. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 9/30/2024 11:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea for the placement and for liking the poem.
Date: 9/22/2024 1:45:00 PM
Lovely depiction of Fall Subimal. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/22/2024 10:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda.

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