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Seductive Little Thought

i want to be the inspiration of thoughts kissed by whispers of your lips unspoken be caressed by your fingers as they trace the edges of curves be laid upon sheets of white seductively move in rhythmic pulses be the cause of your breathless sighs then linger in your afterthought like a memory sincerely your next poem

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/27/2019 1:36:00 PM

Clever again. Playing on people’s predictive thinking.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 1:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Krish :)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 11/22/2019 1:41:00 PM

Okay! You got me! I have read all the responses and can only say DITTO!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 1:58:00 PM

lol thanks Curtis....word play can be fun sometimes... :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/22/2019 5:37:00 AM

Love it - as usual. You're amazing. Bless you dear friend, Love, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 1:58:00 PM

thank you so much... hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2019 8:31:00 PM

love love love it. FAVE

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 9:02:00 PM

wow,,,, thank you so much...especially for the fave... hugs

Joseph May

Date: 11/21/2019 6:16:00 PM

The ending was a sweet surprise..Great write Sandra..

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 6:41:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph... glad you liked the ending :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/21/2019 3:13:00 PM

Definitely seductive--you have limitless inspiration my friend --and your next poem knows it--cleverly depicted.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 6:40:00 PM

thank you so much my kind friend... this one came out of nowhere fairly quickly... hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 11/21/2019 3:11:00 PM

A very intriguing poem with a twist at the end, fascinating write showing the progression of thoughts as if subconscious thoughts were dictating or suggesting to the conscious mind what to write, enjoyed!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 6:39:00 PM

Thank you John, my midday bus scribbles are usually nature inspired, but you can only write about wind and leaves so many times...i wanted something different this one came very quickly... hugs :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/21/2019 3:07:00 PM

Wooing the muse, I love it.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 6:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Maureen.... hugs

Bobby May

Date: 11/21/2019 2:55:00 PM

You did it again, I have to stop reading your poetry it's to good!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 6:37:00 PM

lol Bobby...don't stop reading... thank you for the compliment my friend... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/21/2019 2:12:00 PM

Breathless, speechless and endless, the awe I have for your poetic words and thoughts. Seductively enchanting as if a dream sighed through an open window on a summer eve. Absolutely beautiful.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 2:33:00 PM

Your comment in itself is beautiful sigh ... I know not my usual bus scribbles but you run out of things to say about leaves after awhile when every day scenery seems the same :). Thank you so much my friend. You made me smile ... hugs