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My heart cr ump led like the screwed up scraps of paper now languishing in the trash bin okay, so I write humourous poems ... I rarely write 'free verse' or 'perfect' iambic pentameter yet you lambasted me Your cruel words tore me apart my writing style will NEVER be good enough to please YOU So screw you... YOU'VE WON I QUIT My pen will bleed no more scaly scabs now prevent the ink from running ... submitted to favorite free verse not for any contest Sponsored by laura Loo 04~20~17

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/19/2017 8:44:00 PM

I was sitting on a bus with my dad 1 day and a guy about 60+ was jogging struggling admittedly and kids on the bus were laughing at him and my dad said they may be laughing at him but he is actually out there doing what they couldn't possibly imagine doing . Whose the idiot

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2017 12:14:00 PM

Oh so true and it is those who mock and scorn who are the real losers Christopher:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/19/2017 8:24:00 PM

SCREW THEM Never clicked on the replied section before and seen your replies. Bullied I am incensed pissed off actually what a fing liberty.Small minded Arseholes probably who get a kick out of critiquing you because you can do what they can't. Some people are just sad unfortunately

Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2017 12:14:00 PM

I almost left the site after a month as my simple style was so criticised but now way will I let anyone here get to me again. Writing has become my lifeline since i wrote my first poem when my hubby underwent cancer surgery in 2013: - from being a poetry hater at school now I can't get enough and have appeared on stage in front of 600 people and done talks on creative writing at the school i worked at:-) hugs jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 5/8/2017 10:27:00 AM

This is powerful writing Jan, so nice to see you get POTD! This sums up nicely how many of us felt as we began writing, and how others for whatever reason were critical. Lennon and McCartney had simple rhymes and I think it worked out ok for them! I love your serious writes!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2017 12:42:00 PM

Now if only I could sing and write lyrics John I too could be famous lol:-) I do like to surprise with a more serious poem and I am so glad I got such amazing support otherwise I could have given up in the very early days of my poetry journey!:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/1/2017 11:46:00 AM

Did you ever write before online poetry sites? That's why we write. Having a place for others to possibly read it is a plus. As for acerbic gum flappers, Well Said. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2017 12:12:00 PM

No Robert I never wrote a poem until my hubby had cancer surgery in 2013 and a friend persuaded me to join here - I'd no experience of blogs or social media and it is a real eye opener:-) BUT I was gifted a lifetime membership and I am here for good:-) If folks don't like my simple style well that's their problem not mine:-) thanks for dropping by to comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/29/2017 6:14:00 AM

You won't see me on the list of 100 top poets, they really don't like my crap, even members who write but never ever get a comment rank on their list, but me I'm "special"----Yes Jan, I'm with you "Screw Them" with one difference "I'm Never Quitting. Haha!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/29/2017 9:25:00 AM

I don't give a toss about lists or if anyone likes my poop poems Jerry lol :-) This is about my writing when I first started on soup and was so criticised for my style I almost gave up - well for the mockers and blockers .. take note I am here to stay I am never quitting the site lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/26/2017 5:40:00 PM

Don't give it a second thought Jan. Most everyone here loves your poetry including me. I'm happy to see you won POTD! Congratulations my friend. I love to laugh at your creative humorous poetry. ; ) 7

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2017 5:50:00 PM

Thanks Connie:-) I never know where my muse will take me and I think this poem surprised many on soup but I would never leave - In the past my style was criticised and if folks don't like my humour then I can appreciate it but I am here to stay:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2017 9:58:00 AM

Oh, Jan! I was shocked to read those final lines, how could someone be so cruel with their words! but yes, I know words can kill:(:( Keep writing, let me be honest, I like your serious ones better than humorous ones, though you do excel in them too:) congratulations on your POTD:)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2017 12:15:00 PM

Wow thanks for the feedback Jo ....I'd better start writing some more serious poems !!!!!(but humour especially limericks will always be my personal favourite as I know now my uncle and aunt both wrote humourous poems especially limericks and my maternal grandma and mum wrote (I never knew about my mum writing ever but she did it in her younger days)so its in my DNA ) :-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/22/2017 4:57:00 PM

If you EVER think of quitting...I will come to your home, and give you throttle! ;) Sweetie...I love your poetry. To each his/her own. I'm sorry you've been hurt....like water off a duck's back. You are so popular here and loved. Sending warm hugs. I had to read through comments to know what this was all about...I'm glad you are staying...I keep away from the drama. You know my past history. ;) Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2017 5:15:00 PM

It makes me smile Eileen - I write a poem which is very different to my usual style and get POTD lol :-) This is based on history from when I first joined the site and now I really don't give a toss ... if folks don't like my humour they simply don't have to read - there is a place for us all but rest assured Eileen I am here for good and intend to keep writing until I can no longer hold a pen:-) I was on stage again tonight with a group of like minded humourists and it was great fun seeing people laugh!:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/22/2017 8:18:00 AM

Jan: All folks who delve in the arts have established egos(Poetry) I get a lot of N/A'S but I don't care though I am surprised sometimes. I loved your poetic response. Please read my poem,Spontaneous.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2017 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Ralph I will drop right over:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet

Date: 4/21/2017 11:25:00 PM

Wow! This is so perfect, Jan. lol Love it! And, I love your "simple" poetry. This one is simply delicious! ;D Congrats on POTD...so deserved.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2017 7:02:00 AM

Thanks Carol:-) each to their own with poetry styles, it is all a matter of opinion no one is better than another. I will continue to write simple poop poems although i can surprise folks with the occasional more serious poem:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/21/2017 6:57:00 PM

Jan, you are so talented and it shows all the more here because you are pushing the boundaries on several levels:) Amitiés

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2017 6:49:00 AM

Thanks Anne Marie:-) from being a poetry hater at school (I found it uninspiring) I now can't stop the poems from flowing:-) hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 4/21/2017 6:52:00 PM

Don't Quit Jan I am Listening

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2017 6:48:00 AM

I will NEVER quit Chris:-) If folks don't like my simple style especially limericks then they don't have to read them ... I LOVE the form and am going to produce a book of funny poems that's why I write so many. I really don't give a toss now what folks say about my poetry BUT I am here to stay:-) hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 4/21/2017 6:51:00 PM

Jan Absolutely brilliant sums up perfectly the frustration 1 can feel when writing But this poem should reafirm you this. Never stop its your Best work yet. Thanks Chris

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2017 6:45:00 AM

Thanks so much Chris:-) I was badly bullied when I first joined here for my 'simple style' and I actually gave up writing for a week as I thought my poems were worthless... wonderful people here supported me and I have grown and learned so so much - from a total novice writer I have now written over 1400 since I joined and have appeared on stage several times ... and tonight I will be appearing again at a poetry night with a bunch of like minded humourous poets ... last time we performed it was at our Gaiety Theater in front of over 600 people - tonight it is a much smaller affair:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/21/2017 2:26:00 PM

It's a sad state when others feel the need to cut down others so they can feel more powerful'' when true power is helping and encouraging so others can achieve their goals, as friends that's what we do . A bold, emotion filled write Jan:) Terrific title. I read All you write Jan , you brighten and entertain many through your poetry. thank you. Congratulations on POTD Jan:) blessings xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:01:00 PM

A litle change of direction for me Lynn and I am overwhelmed by the comments I've had:-) the humour will be back:-) hugs Jan xx

Running Wolves

Date: 4/21/2017 2:11:00 PM

Nooooo... don't let that be real... write on and keep spilling ink... give no thought to thoughtless morons and thier words of hate... May the Lord rebuke them for their thoughts, words and deeds... their actions will justify there end... rise above and write on always...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:02:00 PM

Hey its not for real... I have a lifetime membership and I intend to use it for as ling as I can hold a pen:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/21/2017 1:08:00 PM

Jan there is nothing wrong with your poetry, I have always enjoyed your poems. I do not want you to stop writing your poems are well written , and I enjoy all the poetry that you write. So continue to write your poetry. I rated this poem a 7 but it should be more.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/24/2017 2:36:00 PM

I am happy to hear it. Because I do enjoy your poetry. My friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/24/2017 2:36:00 PM

Hugs xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:03:00 PM

I will be here for as long as I can hold a pen i am amazed to get POTD for what is a change of style for one poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/21/2017 12:35:00 PM

SCREW YOU you tell 'em Jan! There is no place in art for such devilry ---- to judge another's work so harshly, I always liked your poetry; whoever they are SCREW THEM ---- if they think they're so hot I'll step in the ring with them with a poetry contest to see what they got.... Keep writing Jan and God bless!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:05:00 PM

I got badly bullied when I joined here by someone who didn't like the fact my 'simple poems' were more popular than their masterpieces... even now i still struggle to write sonnets as it knocked my confidence so badly but I will be here until i can no longer hold my pen:-) hugs jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 4/21/2017 11:28:00 AM

Congrats Jan. Not been online since some weeks...Such powerful words here. Deserves to be POTD! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:05:00 PM

Thanks so much Sunita:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/21/2017 10:38:00 AM

Talent shines bright, congrats on POEM OF THE DAY Well deserved. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:07:00 PM

I have another poem called mad cat woman to post sometime lol will leave it for now but that too is written from the heart for family reasons lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 4/21/2017 10:02:00 AM

please dont let that be the case....i Love your work, every trace....it inspires me to seek greatness....and also the power of patience....because your style is simply you....so no matter what, continue what you do....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:07:00 PM

Never fear Eric it is purely poetic licence I am here for good:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/21/2017 9:22:00 AM

Ever heard of Shel Silverstein? The man wrote the most simplistic stuff ever, probably would never have won poem of the day honors here-went on to great acclaim, songs, poems books, etc. Your style is you, don't be anything you don't want to be. You would'nt be our Jan if you did. Poop on Dear Jan, poop on...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:08:00 PM

I've not heard of them Charlie but I will look up some of his work and I am here to continue to pen poop for many a year:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 4/21/2017 8:57:00 AM

Jan, oh this is so emotional. I wish I could give you a hug. Whoever this nasty person is shame on you! But Jan what a creative write 7+++ and congratulations on POEM OF THE DAY!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:10:00 PM

Its just a poem Constance I am over the hurt from when I first joined but sometimes this stuff just flows from the pen:-) I'm amazed to get potd and all the comments and soup mails that have come my way:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/21/2017 8:40:00 AM

I pray you are kidding dear, Jan! Who has dared to criticize your humorous writing my Empress of Limericks! Please, do not let yourself be distressed over an idiots ( I do not know who is or what said but is an idiot) comment! You always make my day with your writing so it is forbidden for you to quit! haha! A 7!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:11:00 PM

I will never quit Demetrios it is just a poem lol but I am amazed at the comments and support I've had generated by a change of style!:-) hugs jan xx

Edward Mccall

Date: 4/21/2017 8:00:00 AM

Congrats on poem of the day Jan. And let me say I may not always comment but I always enjoy your poetry. Don't let whoever win, let your paper be your shield and your pen be the sword. wheel them with pride and please keep us laughing.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:12:00 PM

I will keep the poopy poems flowing as long as I can hold my pen Edward:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/21/2017 7:23:00 AM

Gasp! :O X's O's & 7s

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 3:13:00 PM

thanks Maureen I think my slam style has taken many people by surprise but I never know what will flow from my pen:-) hugs Jan xx