Scorching

scorching underpillows of his paws hot summer asphalt posted on August 12, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/14/2018 9:35:00 AM

You have given new meaning to the term hotfoot!! Nice one, Line! ~ gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/14/2018 4:14:00 PM

Poor dogs - really.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2018 5:37:00 PM

I wonder how they stand it. I never heard the word underpillows for this part of the foot!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 5:38:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea.

Lyric Man

Date: 8/13/2018 2:11:00 PM

Whose fault?? ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 2:17:00 PM

I don't think the dog is dumb enough to choose pavement over grass. Who's left ?! LOL

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/12/2018 10:09:00 PM

Ouch! I can feel this. I always try to lift the dog up, but she yelps and runs off, preferring to go her own way with sore paws.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 11:18:00 PM

Walking on grass must be so much better.