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Scenes From Alaska

The wind is howling There is snow on the mountain The bullfrog sings praises And the crickets and birds join song Listen! Hear...Howling icy wind Old man with white hair and beard Bullfrogs sing God's praises Joined by crickets, birds, hear their song (Same scene that I saw on tv for I don't live there. Presented two different ways. Which do you like best?)

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P Sheart

Date: 1/7/2010 10:41:00 AM

Hi Sara, a wonderful scene you paint hun. Just so you know in case you There's one species of frog here, it literally slows down it's matabolism and freezes in winter then thaws out in spring and leaps back again. It's always amazed me! Thanks for all your gracious comments I appreciate them so much. Love Light Patty

Edward Orozco

Date: 1/7/2010 9:39:00 AM

Oh ur spoken beauty ceates images that bring life to the soul- edward

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/7/2010 7:19:00 AM

Both are very picturesque scenes Sara and I like how you presented them in two different ways. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind comments. All is deeply appreciated! Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary

Prince Freakasso

Date: 1/7/2010 1:34:00 AM

They're equally good Sara! Because the Bullfrogs,Crickets and the birds seem to be enjoying it in both places.So tweet,tweet,chirrup,chirrup and croak,croak;I'm feeling cold I better get my cloak.God Bless....PRINCE

John Freeman

Date: 1/6/2010 5:39:00 PM

Two of the same thing is better Sara. I like them both like a double ice cream cone. One of strawberry the othe vanilla Smile. I ate both of them,. Sincerely, Love Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/6/2010 3:20:00 PM

They're both good. I think that I like a combination of the two best. It's all good... "Listen! Hear... Howling icy wind There is snow on the mountain. Bullfrogs sing God's praises The crickets and birds join in. I hope I didn't take too much liberty with this. You have written many excellent lines... Keep those words flowing. Love to you. Dane Ann

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/6/2010 2:04:00 PM

I like the top one better i think, how do you spell camelion?

Elaine George

Date: 1/6/2010 12:07:00 PM

The second, dear Sara . Leaves more to the reader to ponder. An eliment of mystery. Love, Lainie . Re: B.B. King, it is necessary to read his bio to understand the impact of my words. Love, Lainie. And thank you for commenting.

Andrew Roza

Date: 1/6/2010 6:36:00 AM

Hey sweet words of poetry. I would agree to say I preferred the first one but it was a touch call. but nice penning in not so many words :) Andrew

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2010 6:03:00 AM

I like the first one.. the second one is just as good but something about the first one presents a clearer visual to me.. Alaska is beautiful country.. my son and his wife went there for their honeymoon a few years ago... loved it so much.. in was in April so still nice .. Patty Adams lives there too... so happy we have all come together on this site and the miles don't separate us on the Soup... great job Sara to start my day... multiple choice always gets the brain cooking..