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The septic stench of desolation has followed me into a quagmire of depression and self-loathing. And scat-colored walls weep neglect upon my fragmented soul. My life is like a puzzle, missing a few pieces, all jumbled up and fallen into decay, with no chance of completion. Dark shadows occupy the empty spaces where my broken heart harbors dying dreams and shattered truths, held together by the opiate of hope. And like a tattered quilt of guilt, my future's stitched together by a needle threaded with tears, fears, and regrets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/23/2018 10:25:00 PM
"like a jigsaw puzzle missing pieces" is a very good comparison to how many people feel. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:21:00 PM
So beautiful and sad..congratulations on your win, Emile! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Date: 3/5/2018 8:48:00 AM
Brilliant writing Emile! Congratulations on your win! ~ Judy
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Judith, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/5/2018 8:45:00 AM
Wow! Emile, this is quite the evocative piece! Few compare with your free verse writing skills, congrats on a great contest win! Enjoying immensely your books!
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:09:00 AM
Thank you John, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/5/2018 5:55:00 AM
so much said in such few words, you write with such grace and ease, beautifully sada piece of art.thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, I appreciate your encouragement and support, as well as the placement in your contest my friend, Emile,
Date: 4/10/2017 2:08:00 AM
Your words paint a very stark picture. Haunting, yet beautiful. Congratulations
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Date: 4/10/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Leileah, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 4/9/2017 8:11:00 PM
This is VERY good writing and so descriptive, EMile. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 4/10/2017 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 4/9/2017 11:12:00 AM
How desperately sad you write Emile, if that was your mission, you achieved great success, congratulations...
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Date: 4/9/2017 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2017 8:39:00 AM
Strong depiction of desolate atmosphere and emotion. Congrats on your win, Emile.
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Date: 4/9/2017 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 11/4/2015 12:25:00 AM
Short, but searing piece, Emile. Congrats! Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/4/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your encouragement. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 5:37:00 PM
Powerful, deep and well crafted poem my friend! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 11/3/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Robert, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Emile! Powerful write. Sandra
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Date: 11/3/2015 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Sandra, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 1:03:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:45:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 1:58:00 AM
Real sad Emile.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 11/3/2015 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Upma, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 10/27/2015 8:33:00 AM
This is indeed sad, I suspect it will do well.
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Date: 10/27/2015 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your encouragement. Emile.
Date: 10/27/2015 12:13:00 AM
desolate scene so wonderfully expressed, emile.. hugs
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Date: 10/27/2015 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/26/2015 7:04:00 PM
Well crafted write!
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Date: 10/27/2015 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Ken, I appreciate it. Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs