Sansar

I can't deny the allure of stability.

A red-brick house with a front porch and wooden pickets,
A mango tree with summer-drooping branches, 
A spice garden in pitchers and pots.
The long corridor that runs to the living room,
The stairs that lead up to the worldly roof.
Chiming winds curling the curtains on the windows, 
Darkness receding from south to north.
Where Your steps will echo in the rhythm of the rain, 
And where I will be, drenched in your scent,
Reciting Tagore.

Ah! 
What a life it'll be! 
You, me and eternity.

I want it all and I want the road,
Sunsets, gasoline and upcoming bends.
My greed has never known bounds, 
My hubris to get to you and get away.



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Date: 19 / 12 / 2016

'Sansar' means family microcosmical, while in a broader sense it denotes the physical world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/1/2017 12:08:00 PM
Well done, Tamal! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 1/1/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, sir!
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 1/1/2017 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, sir!
Date: 12/23/2016 7:17:00 PM
wow, I LOVE this, Tamal. I don't understand a few of the words, but the meaning of it is well understood. Awesome poetry.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/24/2016 2:06:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Your visits are always appreciated.
Date: 12/23/2016 1:26:00 AM
Hi Tamal, the Hindi title caught my attention and I've not been disappointed:) great writing:)
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/23/2016 3:05:00 AM
Thanks, Jo!
Date: 12/22/2016 8:27:00 AM
Enjoyed reading, Tamal, wonderful surroundings merry Christmas happy holidays
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/22/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thanks! To you too, Eve!
Date: 12/21/2016 12:55:00 PM
7! Great poem, Tamal - it rushes to the reader, like we are reading your mind. "Sansar" like the virtual reality project? Ah, to have a mango tree where one can pick a ripe mango and eat it.... Yet there is also the Road. I've been hard upon the road for almost 36 years now. Once had a big garden, now I have nothing there, which is both good and bad.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/21/2016 11:28:00 PM
36 years is a long time, my friend, I hope you enjoyed your journey.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/21/2016 11:27:00 PM
It definitely takes a lot of care. I am accustomed to apartment life these days, but I do have spice garden along side a few flower plants on my balcony. I have heard of it, but I've never gone online on it. 'Sansar' microcosmically means family, while in broader sense it denotes the physical world. My intention of using it was the former. :)
Date: 12/21/2016 12:28:00 AM
I like your change in rhythm that helps bring your intentions to bare!! :) well done Tamal. Big Hugggs. Deb
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/21/2016 4:00:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Deb!
Date: 12/20/2016 1:28:00 AM
It reads like a poem of attraction and repelling. Want to stay, want to go, To love, to hate. Beautiful poem Tamal.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/20/2016 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Darren. The initial idea was to create a sense of dichotomy on a few levels. As always, thanks for reading!
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