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RUDOLPH'S BROKEN LEG

It’s Christmas Eve in Lapland And there’s been a last minute disaster. The sleigh is packed and ready to go And Rudolph’s leg is in plaster. He tripped and broke a couple of bones, In his leg, just above his hoof. Which would make for precarious landing On a slippery, snow covered roof. So Prancer has been promoted And will lead the herd instead. And, because his nose isn’t shiny, He’s an LED light on his head.

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Date: 1/17/2025 6:06:00 PM
Great flow and good on you for rhyming every other line. I am glad that Prancer was the one promoted and got an LED for his head. That was genius. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Date: 1/12/2025 7:17:00 AM
Yess! The flow and rhyme... perfection!! You have my vote for a winner! Xo
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 1/13/2025 1:33:00 AM
Thank you Crystol. Hopefully Rudolph will recover in time for next Christmas

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