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Ripples

no more is she dead…with ripples of her memories ye bring alive 04.02.2023 Poet’s note: A father feels distraught that his daughter left them soon after birth upon not finding him there to hold her in arms, an admiring father. Later, after years he finds one he thinks she’s his daughter. The girl too feels that way. This Monoku summarizes his heart-felt feelings.

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Date: 3/27/2023 7:50:00 PM
Very heart-warming! What gift on a birthday could be more precious than this? I have no words.
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Date: 2/20/2023 3:45:00 PM
So nice and so true. Congrats
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Date: 2/20/2023 7:18:00 AM
So sweet and tender, with a happy ending. Congratulations on your win! :)
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