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Rhythm of Heaven

Whirl whirl whirl Like the fallen feathers Turn, fall and again swirl Go go go As the wind drives by Just don't stop the flow Glide glide glide Through the great vast world Just relax and relish the fun ride Fly fly fly Just cleave the clouds And touch the dazzling sky Bring bring bring The rhythm of heaven Through the words you sing September 17 2021

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Date: 9/18/2021 11:11:00 PM
"Just cleave the clouds and touch the dazzling sky"... so beautiful ...loved the rhythm and flow... Have a blessed lovely day dear Supraja... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/17/2021 6:14:00 AM
There is a profound message in your poem Supraja. Loved the technique of writing this poem You did well. Hugs.
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Date: 9/17/2021 6:13:00 AM
Rhythmic and uplifting--well done, Supraja.
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Date: 9/17/2021 5:52:00 AM
An enchanting poem that brings joy to the heart, dearest Supraja! Hugs xxx
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Date: 9/17/2021 5:29:00 AM
Lovely! Gives a sense of freedom which is joyous.
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Date: 9/17/2021 5:23:00 AM
So beautiful and with a sense of freedom too. I love it. A Fave for me :)
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