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I'm on the hunt for comprehension. Furthermore, I'm on the look for attention. Life may be tough, and there's no success. From the standpoint of one's mental wellness. Rainbow wishes for kids with tolerance Guardians have encountered an inconvenience Our actions drove the world absurd. When youth fade, It's ideal to be furled. Overstating the pertinence of the real world.  What do you view promptly when you look around? Parents wish you had been a kid for a longer stage. You're guilty, but you can't undo what you've raged.  Your hair and eye color reflect your likability.  To recognize your skin and dress so lovely. You're unique in shape and appearance.   You're not the same as your twin if you reappear once. In the meanwhile, be patient where you are. And continue to do that same dedication spar. "Let's bear the costs and act forward with anything." You have merely started living out your true calling.

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Date: 8/12/2021 12:25:00 PM
Much wisdom in your thoughtful analysis, Lassad. Life is complex. Patience and dedication always win in the end. So well said!
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Date: 8/12/2021 3:32:00 AM
We are all unique and that is wonderful, this idea drives your poem Lasaad....Delice
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Date: 8/12/2021 5:47:00 AM
You’re correct, Delice, the whole idea behind this poem is our uniqueness. Blessings and hugs
Date: 8/12/2021 2:12:00 AM
Loved your poem. There's depth in it. And it seems it's just the beginning.
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Date: 8/12/2021 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor, I’m glad you like it, and I’m so proud of that. Blessings and kindest regards dear Victor

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