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Resisting Love

(form 5-7-5 kawanagi) no ties no bindings want nothing short of freedom take no prisoners Posted on April 29, 2018

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Winged Warrior

Date: 4/30/2018 6:59:00 AM

Well done my Haiku-ish friend lol...stay in the light...^WW^

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/30/2018 6:14:00 AM

Open ended solution, love this.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 4/29/2018 8:54:00 PM

Ha! This is great. A feeling many of us share in so few haiku words

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 9:59:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Rhoda. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2018 7:26:00 PM

Wow! You have nailed it Line. A lovely haiku that says you are an assertive women, who can do nicely. Great poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 9:59:00 PM

Well, I only remember these feelings. LOL

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/29/2018 2:41:00 PM

your sense of freedom reigns, line... nice 'aha' moment!..huggs

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 9:59:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, nette.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 2:16:00 PM

a very interesting twist at the end. I like best of all when the last lines are clever like this.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:00:00 PM

LOL thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/29/2018 2:05:00 PM

Unchain the bond, you are free! Insightful write dear Line! Stay bright!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:00:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma.

Robertina B.

Date: 4/29/2018 2:00:00 PM

"A wonderful haiku, Line.. "

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:00:00 PM

Thanks, Robertina. Much appreciated.

Susan Mills

Date: 4/29/2018 12:49:00 PM

I know somebody who embodies the sentiment of your poem. Take no prisoners. No ties and no bindings. Well said.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 1:30:00 PM

Ah, to be young again !