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Remember Me To Linda-Marie

She was the first here to welcome me, Our beloved sweetheart, Linda-Marie With praise she offered effervescently She encouraged my entre into poetry She was open and caring with purity of heart Her sincerity was evident right from the start Too soon, from us, she would depart Our mistress of poetry, known as “Sweetheart” Her passion and emotions were worn on her sleeve A few selfish egotists forced her to leave But her love for the rest of us made it a short reprieve She came back where she belonged and we were relieved Her health was fading but her courage held strong She continued her encouragement for me all along For the Good Lord to take just seems to be wrong I will always remember her – My Sweetheart, My Song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/29/2014 5:50:00 PM
Joe, Congratulations, in Amy's heartfelt contest for "Our Beloved, Sweetheart." RIP.... Love ~LINDA
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Joe
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:44:00 PM
Very nice, Joe. Congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2014 5:14:00 AM
Awesome poetry Joe,,, a great tribute n a wonderful top placement,,,congrats !
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Date: 5/1/2014 1:09:00 PM
Beautiful tribute for a beloved sweetheart of Psoup!! .. I wished I had a chance to know her personally.. but w/ all the pieces made for her, I feel like I've known her so much!! ..Very well written ,Joe! your love to her is barely felt within my soul.. :O))
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Date: 5/1/2014 12:28:00 PM
oh Joe this is a beautiful tribute to someone who was obviously very loved here! Hugs Jan xx
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