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Reflection of a Knife

my eyeball knocks like a pendulum against the keyhole socket too close too personal the beating of my breath against the wooden door sweat seeps into its pores as a lovely form in negligee drifts slowly to the floor the reflection of a knife sees more than I was hoping for but the monster ganders about paces the floor laughs in bursts wipes away tears as i fear for my life but i can’t draw the strength to pluck my eye out of the midst of danger the keyhole otherworldly has a power to hold me suddenly the light’s extinguished so i slowly inch from the keyhole’s grip as a voice hauntingly asks, “are you looking for this?” the stranger has a key wrapped around his bloody neck this time my eyeballs scream and turn to run as i collapse in my negligee to the floor and see someone’s watching me through the keyhole door 1/5/2019 Slap the muse and turn it loose contest John Lawless - sponsor

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Date: 2/18/2019 2:54:00 PM
wow, what a write, Kim. Amazing, and the line about the eyeball screaming. Creative as can be. Congrats for your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 5:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! Your encouragement I embrace.
Date: 2/13/2019 4:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2019 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 1/15/2019 1:41:00 PM
A dark mystery, suspenseful! Good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!