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Red Shoes

Red Shoes Pretty legs lonesome heart black dress in the backstreets of Chicago Pretty face ruined heart black soul I stabbed him to death in Chicago

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/22/2024 6:22:00 AM

Nothing like a woman scorned. Loved this succinct write. Red, darkness, death. Perfect. Keep smiling! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/3/2023 5:44:00 AM

Damn good poetry.

Aurore Severo
Date: 9/16/2023 8:43:00 PM

Thank you kindly dear Sir xoxo

Gail Debole

Date: 6/22/2022 5:39:00 PM

Aurore, Your imagery quickly pulled me in and painted a picture of true crime tragedy in poetic terms. Simply stated and powerful. - Gail

Aurore Severo
Date: 6/22/2022 8:09:00 PM

Thank you Gail xoxo

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2022 11:57:00 AM

Those red shoes are conspicuous in the surrounding B&W background, Aurore. This dark, tragic presentation reminds me of another tragic moment...the girl in the red coat in Schindler's List. ~ Warm regards, my friend; pleased to see you posting again. // paul

Aurore Severo
Date: 6/22/2022 8:09:00 PM

Hi Paul, thanks so much, hope you are in good health. xoxo