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Rambling Birds In Flight

Fluttering wings rise High viewpoint gentle senses Float across the sky Joy and fulfillment Love, trust, peace and weightlessness Rushing, gliding wings For Constance's contest Thanks for the inspiration!

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/1/2010 6:53:00 AM

What lovely pictures you painted here, Doris! Enjoyed reading this! Have a great time and keep writing! Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/22/2010 5:39:00 AM

This is very vivid--enjoyed reading it and great thinking of putting in the word "rambling" in your title ;)--btw thanks for reading my A Soul's Journey, hopefully you read the 2nd part too, thanks :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/21/2010 4:48:00 AM

Wonderful poetic write, Doris! Soup mail-Robert

Linda Witt-King

Date: 3/20/2010 10:37:00 PM

Oh, this is wonderful Doris. Yes, there must be so much trust as one takes flight and surrenders to weightlessness. Beautiful write.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/20/2010 5:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Doris this poem should do well in the contest.. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/20/2010 3:23:00 PM

Very peaceful and serene feeling I get when I read this! Great job as usual. ...Peace, audrey

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/20/2010 3:02:00 PM

Birds are beautiful. but pigeons are not.lol my older sister is so afraid of birds, it is hilarious. -Always&Forever LYnette

James Fraser

Date: 3/20/2010 9:04:00 AM

Terrific Haiku Doris, good luck in Constance's contest >> Soup Mail for you >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2010 8:31:00 AM

What an uplifting poem, Doris! Surely, this will be a winner in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/20/2010 7:14:00 AM

I saw five Red Kites floating the thermals this morning it was as beautiful as your poem, thanks for the kind words on my work Daniel

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/20/2010 5:13:00 AM

I love the serenity in this write Doris - It carried me away - Thanks for sharing -:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2010 5:05:00 AM

Oh! To rise on the wings of an eagle and soar with the wind up high,, above life's tribulations and glide...float...sigh... What is a rambing bird? Great write that should do well in the contest...Mom..Jamie found out Thursday that her mother has lung cancer...