Rainbows End

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The mirror of the sun lifts the veil of mist; warm and tender, gently kissed. A prism arc washes the dome of the sky; an illustration of hope where God is nigh. A journey to the horizon, seeking the pot of gold; an elusive pursuit, for the dreams we hold. May 28th, 2022 For: Bite Size Poem #45 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Placed in the category of Honorable Mention Rhymes validated on Rhymezone.com

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/26/2022 7:23:00 AM

Lovely flow, Paulette ~

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/26/2022 7:55:00 AM

Thank you Line ~ the image flowed right through me as I traveled through the pastoral country side of France. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2022 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Rainbows End" is a lovely write/picture. A fresh rain and then a pretty rainbow make a wonderful day. Have a great/blessed day....................

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/9/2022 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Paula~I took this photo while I was in France ~it was a spectacular day~. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/8/2022 7:11:00 AM

This is stunningly beautiful Paulette, every word. Congratulations… Belle

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/9/2022 7:21:00 AM

Belle, Thank you for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/7/2022 9:08:00 PM

"mirror of the sun lifts the veil of mist" - Great image. Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/9/2022 7:21:00 AM

Hi Christuraj, thanks for stopping by to comment. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/7/2022 6:38:00 PM

Paulette, this is such a beautiful, expressive poem. CONGRATS! Janice

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/9/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Janice~glad you enjoyed it! :)Paulette

Valsa George

Date: 6/2/2022 10:14:00 PM

Beautiful images and a lovely picture ! The elusive journey into the sky, seeking rainbow's end to procure the pot of gold is an interesting concept ! Very well composed, dear Paulette !

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/3/2022 12:14:00 PM

Thank you Valsa~rainbows are so magical; I couldn’t help writing this….I was going through photos of my trip to France, the beauty and serenity was breathtaking. :)Paulette