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Rainbow Promise

Storm ominous, dark thundering, mellowing, drizzling rainbow, colours, arc, promise fizzling, fading, sizzling radiant, brilliant sunlight June 22nd 2019 “Sparkling Diamonds” Poetry context Sponsor: Joseph May

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/10/2019 1:31:00 PM

Belated congrats on your poetic win. Very happy and proud of you. Panagiota You go, girl!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2019 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, jennifer

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/28/2019 2:30:00 PM

Thank-you Andrea, yours was amazing and deservedly got a 1st win placing. Hugs, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/28/2019 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A FAV for me!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/28/2019 2:28:00 PM

Thank-you Caren, that is very sweet of you! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/26/2019 3:27:00 PM

Love this form , especially now, you have complemented it with your wonderful poetry..

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/27/2019 12:35:00 AM

Thank you Harry, I look froward to your refined, kind and wonderful comments - you always make my day! Hugs, and Blessings Jennifer.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/26/2019 3:20:00 PM

Congratulations on a beautiful diamante, Jennifer!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/27/2019 12:33:00 AM

Thanks for your welcome visit Ralph , you lovely comment, your congrats, and your much appreciated support and friendship. Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2019 9:31:00 PM

Wonderful write Jennifer, Congrats on your win..

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/26/2019 1:00:00 AM

Thank-you Joseph. Hugs, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/25/2019 7:39:00 PM

Such a radiant piece of great imagery Jenny, astounding piece of writing!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/26/2019 1:01:00 AM

Thank-you Gordon, I enjoyed writing this fun piece of poetry, Hugs, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/25/2019 5:37:00 PM

I am basking in the radiant and colorful glow of this Diamante; a new "fav".

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/26/2019 12:45:00 AM

MLK - I wonder and marvel at your poems so really take this comment as a compliment. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/25/2019 5:22:00 PM

A very creative take on Joseph's contest, Jennifer. Love the way you take us from storms to sunlight in your diamante. We did take similar approaches and I wish you success! Hugs, Carolyn

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/26/2019 12:43:00 AM

Thank-you Carolyn, you are a sweetheart - I hope the same for you also. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/25/2019 10:37:00 AM

A diamond in the rough, you are Jenn...in place for a win my friend...sending love...^WW^...{*J*}

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/25/2019 1:50:00 PM

Hey ^WW^ such a cute comment - thank-you! Hugs, love and light, Jenn.

Charles Messina

Date: 6/25/2019 5:51:00 AM

Very clever Jennifer...reads like a winner to me too! Hugs Charlie

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/25/2019 1:49:00 PM

Thank-you Charlie, very sweet of you to say so! Hugs and blessings, Jenn.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2019 3:27:00 PM

EXCELLENT Jennifer! I can imagine this as a top winner! : ) xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/25/2019 1:46:00 PM

Thank-you Connie, that would be nice. Hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/24/2019 1:36:00 PM

I, like Gershon, loved the back and forth with this clever diamonte!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/25/2019 1:45:00 PM

Thank-you Kim, my first attempt at this form of poetry, but not my last, truly as a lot of fun. Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/23/2019 9:19:00 PM

Great back and forth in this one, Jennifer. Works very well for me, the reader. "Diamonds are forever." Warm wishes, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/24/2019 12:16:00 AM

Thank-you Gershon - I liked your entry to the contest very much also. Diamonds are forever - an excellent James Bond movie one of the best! Hugs, ands warm wishes, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/23/2019 8:13:00 AM

The shape makes me think of a native arrowhead. The poem added light to my morning. Hugs Rick.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2019 2:55:00 PM

Hi Rick, Yes, you are right it does look like an arrowhead but so glad my poem lit up your morning. Thanks for an awesome comment, Hugs, Jennifer.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2019 10:33:00 PM

awesome turn from storm to sun, jen... this is a gem.. sorry about your child; i feel you... huggs

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2019 12:57:00 AM

Thank-you Nette, I know you feel for me, you are just that kind of warm person, think I'm on the right track, or hopefully I am. Hug and blessings, Jen.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 8:35:00 PM

great contrast with storm and rainbow, Jennifer. Aren't these kinds of poems fun to read?

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2019 1:00:00 AM

They sure are my friend and fun to create and to read others. I'm happy you enjoyed. Hugs, Jenny.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2019 3:47:00 PM

I see the promise of sunlight closely behind the storm..well depicted contrast in your sparkling diamond, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2019 1:06:00 AM

Thank you again Vijay - this form of poetry is a first for me but wrote it down several times before i was happy. A wonderful comment as always Vija. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2019 1:31:00 PM

Beautifuly done Jennifer, could do with some cool rain though lol. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2019 1:11:00 AM

What is global warming doing to us - our children and their children will unfortunately suffer unless scientists and politicians sit round a table SOON! Beautifully done, said by you tom, means a lot! Hugs, Jenny.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/22/2019 11:59:00 AM

Wow! This is great Jen! I love it :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2019 1:13:00 AM

Thank-you Heidi, a lovely compliment! Hugs, Jen.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/22/2019 9:32:00 AM

Nicely done, Jenn, I like how you got rid of your storm clouds, went beyond the rainbow, and found your sunshine. Best of luck. John

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/22/2019 11:29:00 AM

Thank-you John, this form of poetry is a first for me - a lovely comment, always up for a challenge - hugs, Jennifer.