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Written for the Alphabet Soup contest sponsored by Joseph May

As Balmy Comets Dazzle, Exhaling Fragranced Gold; Haloed In Jasmine Kisses~ Lyrical Moon Nimbly Orchestrates Peace, Quenching Radioactive Stars, To Unwed Vain Woes; Xylophones Yield Zephyrs.

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Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2025 6:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/2/2025 11:07:00 PM

so smooth. lovely write. congratulations dear poet, cheers!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/2/2025 8:36:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/lovely write again. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2025 10:30:00 AM

Seeing this one again. . wonder when it will get judged.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/23/2025 1:15:00 PM

Just delightful dear Inky! Words wait to do your bidding in striking images and totally unique perspectives in the themes you choose! This contest turned out to be more challenging than I thought and I missed the deadline but after reading this ABC poem I know yours is a poetic masterpiece! Blessings of stars to you dear friend! Samzy ~

Valsa George

Date: 1/21/2025 9:59:00 PM

I found this contest so challenging and had almost given up. But when I saw many doing it with much ease, I just made a final try, but not to my satisfaction. You, a gifted Wordsmith have met the challenge in a masterful way. I am not surprised at all, dear friend. All the Best.,

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/21/2025 1:22:00 PM

IE, I love that you write for contests at times. This is an interesting one and your composition brings a smile to my core. You've made a compact and wonderful universe with this one.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/19/2025 7:01:00 PM

This is a lovely picture glazed with impeccable impressions, ink...stunning work!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/18/2025 5:24:00 PM

'As Balmy Comets Dazzle, Exhaling Fragranced Gold,' is one example of why I find this poem to be so very lovely. It's a fave for me. Best wishes for the contest. :)

Silent One

Date: 1/18/2025 10:31:00 AM

ABC, as easy as 123.... another form you have mastered so well.. this shows the power of you vocabulary and your chosen words are so good and it flows so well.. All the best in the contest..

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 1/18/2025 12:45:00 AM

As Balmy Comets Dazzle, ooooo the imagary!!! Exhaling Fragranced Gold.. freaking sexaaay!!!! Haloed In Jasmine Kisses… ooo Lyrical Moon Nimbly oooo my my !!! Quenching Radioactive Stars, the kind of excitement this piece is bringing is unspeakable aeeee !!! Stunning!!! I duno this form but you have done an outstanding weave papi!!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/18/2025 1:06:00 AM

Hahah sure papi you da best biased ever

Paige Hind

Date: 1/17/2025 1:58:00 PM

Very lovely, Ink - this looks like a difficult form, but you nailed it <3

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 11:47:00 PM

It isnt that difficult just hard to flow dear paige: thank you for your kind comment

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/17/2025 12:03:00 PM

WOW!!! What a creative write. You painted a wonderful picture with your words. I found this one to be a hard one to write but you make it look so very easy. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..................

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 11:45:00 PM

Awwn thats so sweet dear paula, so kind of you to say, i will now go read your take too; sending you light always

Paul Bell

Date: 1/17/2025 11:49:00 AM

A braw cosmos diamond engaging facade imaginative juxtaposition kickass LMNO, poem. You deserve to win that contest. lol

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 11:44:00 PM

Lol this comment made me laugh: its a very inspiring prompt. You should maybe give it a go: winning~ im not sure about that but i enjoyed this brain exercise. Thank you so much dear paul

Robert James Liguori

Date: 1/17/2025 11:05:00 AM

I love your poem about the cosmos. It brings me to a space of happiness. I always enjoy your writes. ABC form is hard but you nailed it. Cheers.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 11:39:00 PM

Thats a very kind thing to say and yes ABC is very hard to flow, can weave words together no problem, but flowing was hard. Thank you for your kind and generous comment

Daisy Meadows

Date: 1/17/2025 11:00:00 AM

Beautifully written.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 11:36:00 PM

Thank you kindly for your visit and comment, appreciate your support

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2025 9:29:00 AM

oooh, really cool one, Sweetie. I like that it all goes together cohesively and is not just phrases that are not put together in a careful stream of words. I finally did mine. Not perfection, but it will have to do because that contest is filling up fast!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 11:17:00 PM

I loved yours! Its perfect definitely! Flows so well and such a beautiful approach you took! Thank you for liking and leaving your thoughts on mine too/ always grateful

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/17/2025 8:02:00 AM

Dearest, Ink Your ABC poem is incredibly metaphor-rich, beautifully structured, and bursting with cosmic deliciousness. That seemed like a breeze compared to what you accomplished. Good luck in the contest! Sending you good vibes and warm hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 11:16:00 PM

Thank you so very much dear dr sotto, so kind of you! I love that " metaphor-rich" if metaphors were a currency maybe ill be a millionaire ah. Appreciate your kindness

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/17/2025 2:31:00 AM

Well composed IE, that was no easy task, you make it look so easy, best of luck in the contest and have a lovely weekend.. Tom

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 4:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind comment dear tom, so grateful always for your unwavering support. Was easy the first part, as i woke up with those lines and then x y z was a bit hard as i kept wanting to change them. Would love to see you do this form too: sending you light always

Di11y Da11y

Date: 1/17/2025 2:10:00 AM

This is so pretty! I would have been amazed if you hadn't done this one seamlessly given your extensive vocabulary. I wanted to buy it until I got to radioactive, then vain and woes haha. You should definitely write the marketing for face creams and make up :)

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 4:23:00 AM

Dont worry radioactive stars would unwed vain woes, quenched by moons balminess haha: Marketing for face creams and makeup made me laugh. You are so funny. Thank you so much always dear dd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2025 1:14:00 AM

- Excellent done, Ink :) - "Radioactive Stars" ... sounds a bit scary - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 4:20:00 AM

Awn thank you dear anne lise, they are bit intense but quenched by moons balmy melody haha. Appreciate your kindness

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 1/16/2025 11:29:00 PM

Beautiful

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2025 4:15:00 AM

Awn thank you dahlin