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Quiescence

=== *^* take the vivacious steps of my world's elated lilt *^* Burning effulgent golden daystar - mirrored, reflected Drawing up the facsimile of faith and luminescence Trees oscillate and dance together with the rhythmic gust of breeze Air - blowing and puffing, zephyr cooled by the brook Turfs overran the land with exultation and furore Fondling, gripping, and cuddling the headstream Odoratas - ample-petaled,whitish-pink flower lilies Bobbing in the reverberating melody of undulated waves Nymphalid - gliding, vagabonding with elegance Bragging its chromatic colorful ala above the stream current Cervids drinking serenely with potable crystalline water Salmons plunging, swimming for life and subsistence Sedimentary rocks carried away gently, instinctively Indigenous sanctuary - obscure, raw Undisturbed habitat of existence Factual heaven - midst of the woodland Home of soothing silence - rivulet of my daydream. > and dreams are sometimes more fun than reality < ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/5/2012 11:26:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:38:00 AM
Wonderful write here jun-jun,congrats on your win!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 4:33:00 AM
there you go with all your colors, jun... congrats!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:22:00 AM
Jun-Jun congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:45:00 PM
and the title itself also lends to the feeling this poem gives of something kin to heaven. congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:51:00 AM
I am totally enjoying seeing the names in my winners' list-- Jun-jun! Long time no see as well! How have you been, kababayan?? This one was just rich with imagery I couldn't help but feel like I was in that sanctuary, but ah, only a dream! Enjoyed this one and super congrats :D!
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Date: 5/24/2012 5:18:00 AM
Jun-jun, this is a well written poem, that I like very much - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/23/2012 11:16:00 AM
Just have to love the diversity of the poets here even in the contests. I am so happy to have been able to read your poetry today Jun-Jun. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to write more along the way. Love, Carol"
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