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Threading the lines contest sponsored by Joseph May 4/13/25

Poem Inspired by Tina Turner's Private dancer record

Scarlet ribbons are woven into her hair, titan ringlets frame her beautiful face. Never refusing to wiggle her pert derriere, rich men pay big to ogle nubile Ella Grace. Huge feather fans ensure she’s never bare ~ Ella’s folks aren’t aware of her work place!

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Date: 4/23/2025 2:55:00 PM
Ella has a secret life, Congrats on your win Jan, Nicely done
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Date: 4/23/2025 2:17:00 PM
That's why she's a private dancer, only she knows... lol ... Congrats!
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Date: 4/14/2025 10:17:00 AM
- Naked and waving her feathers ... no wonder her parents don't know :) - Have a nice Easter weekend, Jan :) - hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2025 10:22:00 AM
LOL Anne-Lise , perhaps she is getting herself a nice nest egg with the big tips lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/13/2025 2:00:00 PM
Ha! Nicely done, Jan! Best of luck in the contest…
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2025 2:02:00 PM
I never know what my muse will come up with next Ilene! cant believe Tina still isn't with us but her music lives on! Hugs Jan xx

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