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Precious Commodity

time precious commodity passing winds blow salt, sand of life vanished

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/14/2012 5:40:00 AM
Ann this is beautiful and enchanting poem, I really like this form Cinquain, I must give it a try. Constance
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Date: 12/13/2012 6:25:00 PM
That is a precious commodity alright..Sometimes it seems that it just disappears..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review is appreciated...Sara
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Date: 12/12/2012 5:19:00 PM
so true,great write ANN
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Date: 12/12/2012 3:43:00 PM
Enjoyed the read
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