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Point of No Return

POINT OF NO RETURN She didn’t say no exactly But I couldn’t catch her eye She surveyed the ground Danced swayed Looked ALL around Looked FAR off – clear through the red brick of Old Main Science Hall Wrinkles of invention shown and a certain element of surprise Her “High!” had been distantly friendly BUT! With a definite hint of a hasty “Goodbye!” Now? Now I was sorry I asked Just a moment of daring She was SO popular And I? The school nerd Now? Oh, NOW to be invisible instead of mentally prostrate before the Queen of Sheba …………………………………………………………… This isn’t a true story. I never had that much courage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/3/2011 4:32:00 PM
I was the lil' Christian boy in school(nerd in those days)(daze), they all said hi, but definately meant; bye ! Great write Sir ! And, "Brave little soul", that's my lil' 7 yr. ol' little Noah, who loves tah smooch his pops (me), the old man! *smiles*Much love love dear poet...love your writes ! james
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Date: 12/28/2010 5:39:00 PM
The format works well to convey the story in this poem. Creative! Happy New Year! Karen
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:00:00 PM
Good one.. Enjoyed the story type poem..So many could relate to the feeling that it implied..I am glad that I stopped by and read this one this eve..Your stopping by and commenting on my work was just what I needed to end this stressful day..Sara
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Date: 12/19/2010 7:45:00 AM
Thanks for your message, Daver. I've read the book several times myself and am always moved to tears by the "monster's" desire to be loved. Hollywood should make the movie from this perspective; it would touch people of all ages, not just kids looking for a good scare. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/18/2010 3:41:00 PM
The Frankenstein "monster" was misunderstood. When you read Mary Shelley's novel, you sympathize more with him than you do with Dr. Frankenstein, Daver. Most people have only seen the Hollywood portrayals and don't realize this. Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/18/2010 12:56:00 PM
Glad it didn't happen to you but it does to a lot of shy people and some of them turn out to be the winners. It all works out in the end. Thanks for commenting on my featured poem and glad to find you here. Will read more. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/18/2010 11:21:00 AM
You gave me a good laugh, Daver. I can see you trying to get the "Queen's" attention. Very funny last verse! Love, Carolyn
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