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!, !... !(!) Not in title'd her **** fell flat Jan's great title lacked impact I've got blue **** so matter of fact no choice but to shout it BLUE **** IN ALL CAPS

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Date: 4/22/2018 7:09:00 PM
This you'll have to repeat // With a poem about a blue cow teat...Whoa, sister! :) Gershon
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/23/2018 7:10:00 AM
Oh, funny you should say that, I have written of cow and teat, an old poem, one of my first posted "Oxymooron the Cannibal Cow" ;) mo!
Date: 4/21/2018 5:00:00 PM
Haha :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/22/2018 6:29:00 AM
;p xo!
Date: 4/20/2018 4:50:00 AM
Extempo...an art in dialog...response poetry...I like it...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/20/2018 6:26:00 AM
Birds of blue feathers... chuckling together ;) Cheers dear! xomo!
Date: 4/19/2018 10:39:00 PM
Lol! Maureen, such an awesome addendum to Jan's poem. Your keen wit and golden pen are ever at the ready :)) Warmest wishes and hugs, my lovely <3
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/20/2018 6:25:00 AM
Giggles! Irresistible ;) Thank you lovely! xomo <3
Date: 4/19/2018 4:51:00 PM
ha ha ha but I've got Blue Tits and I've got to tell the world lol:-) hugs jan x
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/19/2018 7:22:00 PM
Like I say, "tits to the wind"! <3 <3 <3
Date: 4/19/2018 2:29:00 PM
LOL - you felt inspired, Maureen !
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/19/2018 7:23:00 PM
Totally! ;)
Date: 4/19/2018 2:05:00 PM
LOL, very funny!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/19/2018 7:25:00 PM
Funny begets funny ;) xomo!

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