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Poem On Poetry

Word-painting, they say; or painting with words, In charm, it's charmer than most charming birds; Feeling, for many, is its first foundation, Expression, in words, brings affirmation; Sentiment and muse must fondly marry, Verses should flow-grand rhymes and rhythms carry...! Does my work, yet, picture of life portray? Do all colors intertwine, like sun-ray? Do joys evade the scene when pains flourish? Does bliss its jubilant psyche nourish? Do feelings of fear, anger and surprise, Find: it's impossible to compromise...? What's the inner-flow of my florid words? Are they merely beautiful flocks of birds? Flimsy butterflies that flutter around? Cats, rats, geese, cattle and horrible hound? Do beasts of the woods and reptiles well-blend? With their hitting and killing stories end...? Do they paint pictures of human struggle? Or stop just with some selected snuggle...! The deaf, dumb, blind and the lame, who, in calm, Add, to this futile life, tremendous charm...? Young, and old who're, forever, deserted, In my poems, with honor, inserted...? Composing poetry, is not mere fun, A divine mission, with this, is inter-spun; Painting of actual facts should pave way, Toward opening of a small headway; Life without struggles is unfeasible, Dissensions, yet, could be made peaceable...! 26 April 2022 POEM ON POETRY MUSE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Date: 5/1/2022 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write for Beata’s contest. Blessings to you
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Date: 5/1/2022 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful and this stellar poem my dear friend! Thanks for sharing! God bless you always!
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Date: 4/30/2022 10:00:00 AM
A lot of interesting imagery here--and yes, poetry at its best may be a 'divine mission'-- for those it can reach. Congrats on your 1st place win!
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Date: 4/29/2022 9:32:00 PM
Feeling, expression, sentiment, muse, and bringing peace to those who struggle... yes poetry is an artistic merger of all these attributes. A diving mission even. I resonate with your words, and am happy to see you win a 1st place in the muse contest. Warm wishes ~ John
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Date: 4/29/2022 8:06:00 PM
Poetry is Art in Motion. Painting with words is a wonderful way to set emotions free. This thought leaves me in awe. . . . "Flimsy butterflies that flutter around." Words are like that sometimes. Congratulations Christuraj, on this win. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 4/29/2022 7:35:00 PM
Christuraj, Congratulations on your first medal placement with this exquisite work. Thanks for your soupmail and kind comments on my entry Howard
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Date: 4/29/2022 7:45:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, making this poetic occasion jubilant. Belated Poetry Day, dear poet. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/29/2022 9:24:00 AM
I, sincerely, thank you for the opportunity given. Thank you.
Date: 4/28/2022 4:21:00 PM
"Composing poetry, is not mere fun, A divine mission, with this, is inter-spun;"- every word in this poem is chosen and used with utmost care and depth. true - a poet's mission is to reveal the truths of life. "painting with words" - love this phrase. To my fave, Dear Friend. BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/29/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/26/2022 3:48:00 PM
Very nice, Chris. I can't remember if this contest got judged yet, but I bet you will be on the winner list.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/27/2022 3:04:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/26/2022 5:33:00 AM
So beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/26/2022 6:51:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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