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Plum Wings

Plum wings, plucky is the strum of love’s afterglow With purple locks and negligee, angel flew to hubby under sateen satin sheets Lavender ruffling, at the midnight hour, had couple vibing in synchronicity

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/27/2024 10:52:00 AM

Intriguing and descriptive diction so well articulated throughout, i love especially the last lines . Congratulations on your win, thank you for sharing this

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 1/21/2024 4:54:00 PM

Ahhh so cute, Kim. Loved it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2024 7:23:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/18/2024 7:54:00 PM

synchronicity - no better way! ~ Good Vibrations

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 9:45:00 PM

Now I have the Beachboys song in my head!

Silent One

Date: 1/18/2024 12:30:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and use of words here.. I think Ink will like this one.. the last two lines are brilliant..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 1:29:00 PM

I really appreciate that! Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2024 2:10:00 AM

Wow. Negligee, satin, thank God I'm past these illusions. Lovely poem though. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 4:41:00 AM

LOL! Thank you, sweet poet!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/17/2024 10:20:00 PM

Oh, this is a beautiful Fibonacci dear Kim.. I really love 'plum wings' .. It's very unique! I like how within few words you've created a love-hued ambience and painted a scene of enchantment.. "love’s afterglow", "Lavender ruffling, at the midnight hour" Very romantic and gorgeously knitted.. Sending best wishes for the contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 4:42:00 AM

Thank you for sharing what you liked! Hugs ~ Kim