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Please Find Me

Please Find Me… Within my mind, I am nowhere; please find me. I am somewhere with grey despair; please find me. When you’re searching within the crowd, I am lost. No matter where I am not there, please find me. I am so lost; within my thoughts, I am gone! Show me that love because you care; please find me. Where is this place? I am drowning, can you see? No more dismay, I want some air, please find me. Thinking of love is not for me; it’s just wrong! I am too old to think of care; please find me. The door is closed, the night is dark, desires gone. Yet I see you, to God I swear, please find me. You let me go when I was young; now it’s late. I can be found, just ask me where, please find me. With all my soul, with all my love, I am yours. You have so much, nothing to share; please find me. Tell me “Haloo” where is this place, to be found. The truth is there; my love is fair; please find me. 3/17/16 Haloo

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/30/2017 9:49:00 PM

very nice -JT

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2017 11:38:00 PM

Honestly JT you are so welcome

Akkina Downing

Date: 2/5/2017 2:34:00 PM

I really love this piece. It's brilliantly beautiful :)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/6/2017 2:03:00 AM

Thank you Akkina....

D. C. Jordan

Date: 8/24/2016 10:17:00 PM

Well written, I like it. DC

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/28/2016 1:25:00 AM

Thank you DC

Jai Bankson

Date: 6/15/2016 11:18:00 PM

Pay no attention to that please...Should have simply said''Thank You''

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/16/2016 1:14:00 AM

THANK YOU for stopping by........

Jai Bankson

Date: 6/15/2016 11:15:00 PM

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Constance La France

Date: 4/8/2016 9:32:00 AM

Pashang, I liked your poem very much, nicely done ~

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/8/2016 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Broken wings, you are so kind.....Pashang

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2016 8:54:00 PM

wow, pashang. How many of this type of poetry do you have? You look like a pro with it here!!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/1/2016 4:32:00 AM

My dearest Andrea, Ghazal must be spiritual or about love, otherwise is not ghazal. Although, it started in Arabia, but Persians perfected it. I am not a Pro , but I have six books of poetry all in Ghazal and masnavi. If you know how to read Farsi, I'll send the link. Happy Norooz!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/30/2016 10:05:00 AM

A great introspection my friend...excellent write

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Tim, you're always kind with your comments. To me this piece is more extrospection than introspection. Nevertheless, thank you, it is my other half "Haloo" that is constantly seeking ....

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/30/2016 8:18:00 AM

You are not that old!. I will find you, someday!. Love the write. Peace my friend:)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 1:23:00 PM

Thanks DT, age is something relative. I feel old. Thanks anyway... we know each other for millenniums.