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Betsy was quite fickle A cow who loved her pickle She ate it with corn As her calf bawled, forlorn To be left with only a trickle Of milk not worth a nickel Since, in all truth, it did mourn For milk that didn’t taste like a pickle PLAYFUL word chosen P Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France September 25, 2021 Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper March 6, 2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/5/2021 11:55:00 AM

Very cute Gina! Am still giggling over all that pickled milk! So much fun! Congratulations for your win! Blessings and prayers for you! Hugs! :D"

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2021 8:26:00 AM

Gina, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this delightful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/29/2021 4:26:00 PM

Very humorous Rama, love it. Congratulations on your win… Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 12:42:00 PM

what a fun poem Regina, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2021 3:53:00 AM

- A sweet poem, Gina - I hope young children know where the milk comes from today :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2021 8:44:00 PM

I love this poem, Regina, I can just taste her sour pickle milk. Fantastic nursery rhyme with great flow and rhythm. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/11/2021 2:05:00 PM

Hi Regina, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/6/2021 1:47:00 PM

Dear Gina, your brilliant and gifted pen shines with striking sensory imagery and a wonderful rhyme scheme. I love your nursery rhyme, it's whimsical, wistful, imaginative, lyrical and memorable. Best wishes for a win, my dear friend.. ~Susan

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/6/2021 10:10:00 AM

LOL. Very enjoyable. A five-year-old will get a kick out of this! Nice work.