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Pic Motifs - Visual 3

His world hangs on a wall. His wheeled chair sits in a corner. His tillered escape – the Barque, Astral Traveler. //20 words// ©11/17/2017 submitted to – PIC MOTIFS – poetry Contest

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Gabby Sabre

Date: 11/18/2017 2:23:00 PM

Non-conventional rendition of the theme; very interesting. The word count though should be 25-30 words, I think. Better check, sir. Best of luck!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2017 12:04:00 PM

wow, that takes imagination to tell the story that goes with this picture. I could not think of a word to say for that image, but you did it in a way that made it so interesting.

Constance La France

Date: 11/17/2017 2:05:00 PM

John, this is terrific for the contest, love have you visualized that visual, I looked at it and said to self, no way !